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    Paranoid

    Is that you is that me all of the sudden.
    Looking around seeing you smile everywhere.
    Is that you is that me all of the sudden.
    I see you on the walls going crazy.
    Why can't you stop this pain you are causing.
    Yes your causing me to be Paranoid.
    Why can you ,and your memories stop me from being paranoid.
    It just all seems that i cannot rest.
    Can you not see what your doing to me.
    All of your memories are causing me to be Paranoid.


    Alone Part 2 will be the next poem I post.

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    Re: Paraniod

    Ahh very nice
    I like it. Nice emotions.
    Kepp it up. Hope to see the next!^.^

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    Re: Paraniod

    Ahh thank you. Tommorow CST around 4:20 - 5:00 I shall post part 2 of alone.

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    Re: Paraniod

    Ahh I shall be waiting. Awsomeo.
    yup yup I love your poems. hehe ^.^

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    Re: Paraniod

    I might even create it now and share it. I will see after clearing my mind.

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    Re: Paraniod

    Hmm..this is nice...not bad...gotta mind the grammar though...it's a bit confusing...but gladly...the message can still be projected ^^

    Keep up the good work..

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    Re: Paraniod

    Yea i noticed the grammatical errors i made. But you still liked it.

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    Re: Paranoid

    I didn't mind the grammatical errors. Sorta added to the mood... people who suffer from paranoia often ramble. Good poem.

    I never knew the phrase "Ahh" was so popular.
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