woah.. sugoi...@.@ bravo..! nice poem.. i can't read that..is it in french?
Being part of...
Signals that move on endlessly,
Conversations that go along similar ropes.
Time that links certain lives,
The bite of discord tearing others apart.
Uniqueness in politeness,
Working as a key in which we discover.
Within the paths that open up,
Only one way will flourish.
Enchained by the mecanisms,
Unmovable and invicible they are.
And yet life has many keys,
Humanity is vast and has many faces...
Original version:
Appartenance
Signaux qui circulent sans cesse,
Conversations longeant des cordes semblables.
Le temps qui relie certaines vies,
La morsure du désaccord froissant les autres.
Une manière unique de politesse,
Agissant comme une clé que l'on découvre.
Parmi les chemins qui s'ouvrent,
Seule une voie portera fruit.
Enchaîné par des mécanismes,
Immuables et invincibles ils sont.
Pourtant la vie a de nombreuses clés.
L'humain est vaste et de divers facettes...
Note: Wrote original in 7 minutes, wrote the translation a few hours later for AO in 5 minutes...I hope it sounds ok....XD
EDIT: Took out "et' at the last sentence in the English version....
Re-EDIT: Listened to "My Sacrifice" by Creed while translating. The original was wrote at work....alone, in a big night club, resting from washing things and well, wrote it on a small piece of paper in my wallet and my pen I luckily had in my other pocket XD
Last edited by Soldat of life; Apr 01, 2007 at 01:24 PM.
woah.. sugoi...@.@ bravo..! nice poem.. i can't read that..is it in french?
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The original version is in French yes.
So.. this is not a poem made by u then? @.@ or is it ur's but u originally made it in french...
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This poem is written by me. I wrote it today during a break if you read my notes below in my post. All I post here and anything that is posted here should be and only be made by the person that posts or else serious copywrite issues could be broken.
Why u always busy
Anyways, *wipe tears* your vocab is as... brilliant/wonderful as ever. It makes me go @_@ reading it sometimes xD But it's a good poem. Me like![]()
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