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Old Nov 25, 2007, 02:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Part of me...

Part of me…

Hey, how’s it going
Is what I would normally say
But I want to do something else
I want to express myself today

I want to tell you
That you are great
That you take my breath away
That you’re in my heart to stay

You make me smile
You make me laugh
I want you to be near me
Never to let your heart sway

I love you dearly
And I only hope that you can feel it
Each and every day
But now I wonder how you feel about me

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Old Nov 25, 2007, 02:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Part of me...

interesting poem BrokenLover101..the rhymes are pretty good and it has a nice message^^
nicely done keep it up
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Old Nov 25, 2007, 05:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Cool Re: Part of me...

Ah, Yes...One of my favourite poem writer.... I wonder......

Mhm.....Agreed...
Nicely done with the rhyming pattern, It swung beautifully....

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Part of me…

You make me smile
You make me laugh
I want you to be near me
Never to let your heart sway


hmmmm......... =/ Those two lines bugged me out of the rest of the poem...I don't really know why, After I understood the meaning...they still bug me O.o'''''''' Maybe from my point of view...those lines didn't go well in that verse.... [remember; my point of view]


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