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Aug 22, 2007, 09:57 PM
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  ★Phantasmagoria★  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish)
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 Credits: 19,648 | Parting You were never true You didn't really love me So I have to say bye And walk away You wouldn't care anyways Because you loved another So I have to say bye And leave you forever I won't cry Or ever shed a tear I'll leave you now So goodbye..... ___________ yeah yeah it sucked but I know that already.....
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Aug 23, 2007, 11:26 AM
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| Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :)  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York.
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♥~*The Princess*~♥
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Aug 23, 2007, 02:06 PM
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Credits: 3,553 | Re: Parting I'm going to actually agree with Jamie. The ending could have been a little better, and didn't include the repetition of 'So I have to say bye' line as the others did. Otherwise, it was a nice poem.
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Aug 23, 2007, 02:18 PM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: Parting sorry princess gotta agree with the majority..   yup they did not go along well.. i agree with that too... the poem was nice...but it could be nicer.. ^^ |
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Aug 23, 2007, 02:21 PM
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Credits: 3,293 | Re: Parting well i dont know what the others are talking about lol i thought it was quite nice actually
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Aug 23, 2007, 09:34 PM
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| ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish)
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Credits: 19,648 | Re: Parting there happy now meanies? You didn't hafta insult my poem.....thank you theprincess it seems you're the only nice person here.....
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Aug 23, 2007, 10:02 PM
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I look forward to the next poem. 
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Aug 23, 2007, 10:08 PM
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| ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish)
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Credits: 19,648 | Re: Parting then how come on another poem a guy critisized it and got banned huh?????
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