atomik_sprout

Passion...
You gotta have it in your life.
Be it for the love of art, or
for the love of your wife.

Keep it in your heart,
let it take over your soul.
Let it build up inside of you
until it over flows.

Ice-T once said it makes
the world go 'round.
So don't stop the movement,
don't drag yourself down.

What's your passion in life?
Whatever it is, you better keep it.
Anyone who disses passion is
either dead or sleepin'.

These words that I speak
are the truth and nothing but.
So heed them when you're down,
or feel that you're in a rut.

And I swear that you'll feel
so much better than before.
The world will look much brighter
when you walk on out the door.

**Eh... I've been having these bad writing days. I'm not too satisfied with this, but I'm hoping that some of you will like it.**

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Peach_follows

Y'know ... Ive noticed that alot of people seem dissatisfied in their BETTER work, me included.
To me, this is one of your better pieces...
Or maybe I'm just bias... I love passion (and the fact that you're writing about it). You once told me you didn't think you'd ever be a passionate person again. And being passionate about things is something Ive always liked about you. So, glad to see you salvaged that trait.

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bratling

I have to agree, this is one of your better writings. I really like it. I'll have to talk to you more about it later or something i like it so much. Very well written and well....conveyed? I donno how to spell it but you get it dagnabbit.

Inuruto

Peach is right... You shouldn't knock down the "Passion" it was good, but you tend to write nothing, but poems that catches the readers eye... Keep up the work that you do... You have a tendecy to catch the emotion in what you write...

"Emotions are there for a reason; to be empty is when the reason is blank..."

atomik_sprout

I'm glad you think that I've got a knack for writing. ^_^

I'm never really satisfied with any of my writing though. More than my drawings, in fact.

Yeah, I'm glad I kept it too. ^_^
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Thanks to all of you for your comments and encouragement! ^_^ I appreciate it alot. Your words mean alot to me.

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Lasura

Love, love, love makes the world go round, makes the world go round.... ^^ that's how my song goes!!! ^^ Sorry... this:
"Ice-T once said it makes
the world go 'round."
made me remember that song ^^

I like this work quite well... I might agree with Peach and everyone else here that it is one of your best works... but not the best... it lacks something for that- a lill bit of raw emotion... yea... didn't take over me just because of this thing.... but it's very good otherways...

I really enjoyed reading this... nice work indeed... I'll be waiting for more ^^

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atomik_sprout

Why thank you, Laura! ^_^
It's always a pleasure to hear that you like my work--especially the ones I'm not too happy with. Although, I'm pretty happy with this one now, seeing how everyone's diggin' it so far.

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Joe Mage

Great poem, read it earlier. I meant ta comment on it, but my net kept crashin on me. (Like it's doin' now, aaarrrrggghh!!!!). I gotta bug, later. Keep up the work, I hope ta c more.

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