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    Passionate love!

    As they embrace the night
    with nothing but passionate
    intent , there lips slowly glide
    across skin to give pleasure
    like no other.

    The promise to be true and faithful
    makes each touch that much more
    intense as the lay by the fire , as the
    sound of crackling and popping seems
    to fade away as there love seems to
    drown out everything.

    i hand to the hip , a tongue to the
    ear flicking hotly things just seem
    so right as there love spans new area's
    that make love more than just a kids
    game.

    there breathing insync as there body
    press aginst each otrher love just seems
    so real , the passion and desire as there body
    become enflamed with a raging fire as swaet beads
    on there bodys.

    the moon now over head she sighs out as
    he spreads her wings and give her something
    no one ever has then its gone as they hold
    each other so much and let the night fade away
    as they sleep now.
    -----------------------------------------------


    this poem is about how love can mean
    so much to 2 souls as they give one
    another something that makes life what
    it is which is the need for want. comments
    and sugestions are welcomed
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Jun 08, 2007 at 07:26 AM. Reason: i messed the tittle up
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Passionat love!

    arrghh~! that made me horny~!!! xD

    ^^ good work my friend...~! i am so weak in making this type of poem...sounds too vulgar if i make 1.. sigh ~.~ i hope u will do more like this so i can take example at... ^^

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    Re: Passionat love!

    goodness........O_o that was so good. Dude How did you do this it is way awesome.
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    Re: Passionat love!

    i did this poem with what i know but used
    wording to keep alot of it to the mind while
    giving you a hint of what was gong on.

    because love is like that you give
    just enough to begin with and as
    you get into the moment more things
    just happen that are awesome.

    just like the poem does it gives you
    just enough to let you know that's the intent
    while leaving you to think on what else might happen.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Passionate love!

    Wow someone pour cold water on me to cool me off cause this poem is hot! I love the passion and reading it made me imagine being made love to that way which I really hope I do someday. Awesome job sweetie!
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    Re: Passionate love!

    That was amazing keep up the good work and make lots more of them i enjoy all poems

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