arrghh~! that made me horny~!!! xD
^^ good work my friend...~! i am so weak in making this type of poem...sounds too vulgar if i make 1.. sigh ~.~ i hope u will do more like this so i can take example at... ^^
As they embrace the night
with nothing but passionate
intent , there lips slowly glide
across skin to give pleasure
like no other.
The promise to be true and faithful
makes each touch that much more
intense as the lay by the fire , as the
sound of crackling and popping seems
to fade away as there love seems to
drown out everything.
i hand to the hip , a tongue to the
ear flicking hotly things just seem
so right as there love spans new area's
that make love more than just a kids
game.
there breathing insync as there body
press aginst each otrher love just seems
so real , the passion and desire as there body
become enflamed with a raging fire as swaet beads
on there bodys.
the moon now over head she sighs out as
he spreads her wings and give her something
no one ever has then its gone as they hold
each other so much and let the night fade away
as they sleep now.
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this poem is about how love can mean
so much to 2 souls as they give one
another something that makes life what
it is which is the need for want. comments
and sugestions are welcomed
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Jun 08, 2007 at 07:26 AM. Reason: i messed the tittle up
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
arrghh~! that made me horny~!!! xD
^^ good work my friend...~! i am so weak in making this type of poem...sounds too vulgar if i make 1.. sigh ~.~ i hope u will do more like this so i can take example at... ^^
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goodness........O_o that was so good. Dude How did you do this it is way awesome.
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i did this poem with what i know but used
wording to keep alot of it to the mind while
giving you a hint of what was gong on.
because love is like that you give
just enough to begin with and as
you get into the moment more things
just happen that are awesome.
just like the poem does it gives you
just enough to let you know that's the intent
while leaving you to think on what else might happen.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Wow someone pour cold water on me to cool me off cause this poem is hot! I love the passion and reading it made me imagine being made love to that way which I really hope I do someday. Awesome job sweetie!
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Thanks so much I love it!
That was amazing keep up the good work and make lots more of them i enjoy all poems
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