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Aug 24, 2007, 04:06 PM
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 Credits: 1,484 | A Past, Your Future The past holds great despair Hearts broken Lives lost Lies told Betrayal Many hurtful things have been done Each one Another link to the chain holding you back You struggle Fighting to break away Yet you say that you can't go on Nothing else to live for You just stay as you are Crying Feeling great depression from what has happened Lift you head Break away from the past You can go on Free yourself from your chains Let go your emotions of your dark past It is how we move on This is how we get to the future's light We have to let go of our past So we are able to grasp the greater good Believe in yourself The past is then The future is now This is your life, your way of living Don't let anything hold you back The future holds great opportunities Just make it happen Writer's Notes: Eh, I could've done better. I've got really nothing to say other than that. Thanks for reading.
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Aug 24, 2007, 09:46 PM
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Credits: 3,512 | Re: A Past, Your Future Heh... you "could've done better"? Well, thats true for everyone on every subject. But I was quite satisfied with this... It seemed to be one of those things I needed to hear. Something that spoke so specifically to things that have been burdening me. Its great when art can touch people like this did for me. Thank you so much for sharing this 
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Aug 25, 2007, 09:36 AM
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Credits: 1,484 | Re: A Past, Your Future I'm glad you all liked it. I said I could've done better because it seemed to me like it didn't have something that I wanted it to have. But I guess that really depends on the readers. Thank you for your words. =) Edit note: Though this poem kinda seems like it's the end of sad poems for me, (Not sure if I wrote any...) it's not. I will probably write some sad poems one of these days.
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Aug 31, 2007, 07:50 AM
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: A Past, Your Future nice of you to say that I must say ^^ it's really encouraging... This really is something I'd show to a person who has lost believe in himself because of his/her past... Ok, there's actually nothing more to say here. Nice work ^^ |
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... It's wonderful because you describe how you can and usually will when you finally let the past go and you live in the future.^^ Keep up the great work!!!
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