The Path Down

The Path Down

Eyes meet
lips lock
the path down readies.

Hands caress
breathing accelerates
the path down begins.

Fingers fumble
clothing releases
the path down halts.

Arms embrace
skin glistens
the path down continues.

Kisses ensue
neck chest breast
the path down concentrates.

Fingers slide
on beautiful skin
the path down taunts.

Stomach and naval
tongue tip tastes
the path down shortens.

Hair tickles
smell and sight excite
the path down jubilates.

A sweet kiss
upon Eden
the path down rests.

Mouth struggle and push
pleasure moans
the path down struggles

The paths purpose
a sweet taste of
Ambrosia.


Well there that is, let’s see if any one thinks I have a sliver of talent for poetry.

Wow, you definitely have a way with words. It gives you nice..hum...imagery. Keep up, the good work. You silver tongued devil!

OMG! Very good poem Mech I like how my imagination runs wild with it. It is very well writen keep up with the good work. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

you used very descriptive words in your poem which made it very.. interesting to read ^^ keep up the good work =]

DAMN!......
Oh my... that was just.... wow.

well, I had to take a minute for my temp to go down and my heart rate to slow... and now my speach can return enough to say:

That poem was hot! Well written, and very...um... effective. lol

my... that give me darn good images.. nice way with words...good description.. though it is little :D effective like peachy said...

That give me them some good ol memories... *sighs*~ *looks around*.. why u guys looking at me like that? ^^

Thanks, I think I like Peach_follows reply the best though. :laugh: ^__^

I thought I would tread the waters of a more "adult" poem. The toughest part about writing it was I wanted to be a little less, hmmmm "artful" :laugh: with my descriptions.

I may have some more of this type in me, maybe I'll get a following for these. (:laugh: yeah right :rolleyes1: )

Give me a second here... Woo... another moment please, I have to compose myself!
Wow... Very descriptive, and very nice flow! Man anyone out there who says they didn't have a wild ride there is either lying or inexperienced!
I think I may have blushed a bit there, my friend here was (still is) looking funny at me and smirking. He came over for me to do some updates for him on his computer, and he stayed. Naturally he wanted to know what I was looking at, I told him to mind his own screen, of course he butts in and reads the poem. Guess I'll hear about this at work for at least a couple of weeks. But it was worth it. I liked your poem very much, nice job.