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    Paw Prints

    Paw prints


    Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand
    As they disappear into this earth torn land.
    Will they be true or stay forever blue?
    That's were this BlueFox will stand.

    I have traveled a road long and true
    Only to see the true fate of blue
    Now I’m here revenge ridden world
    Waiting for my purpose to soon unfurl

    Like a fox I stand with my head held high
    Paws planted and ears to the sky.
    I look around and see my family and friends
    Just like a fox family the story begins.

    Never any feeling to run away
    Only instinct I have is defend and stay.
    For this BlueFox foot prints will show in the sand
    And begin to disappear into this earth torn land.
    Of course I’ll be true and stay forever blue
    That’s where this BlueFox will stand.


    here's another one of my poems written today! I hope that you all will comment and tell me what you think!

    BlueFox1

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    Re: Paw Prints

    I think it would have been better without the rhyming.
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    Re: Paw Prints

    Yay,another poem by Fox! I thought it was really good.I liked it alot. Another great poem Fox.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Paw Prints

    this was my first time reading your peoms i like it and
    its cool to have belifes like that because everyone need someone
    to stand for them. awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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