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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,512 | Peach Follows Peach Follows, and thats the reason why. Shes rotting inside. Following a trail which only makes her more upset. Trying to remind the ones who just wants to forget. When will she learn,...... you can't make someone care. Why does she lurk in the shadows of those who don't want her there? She couldn't wait to fall for him. And it was him who shook the tree. But Peach, Stop following that trail!!! It wasn't meant to be. You've got beautiful blossoms that wait for you, growing on your branches. Go back now, and nurish them... you'll get no second chances. Oh, Peach... You are not spoiled yet. You simply have just ripened. The longer you kick around on this trail, your blossoms will be frightened. So turn away, stop waiting at someones feet to be picked up. Just go back to your peachtree home, Help those blossoms to grow up. You're soft, you're sweet... with much to give... it will be alright. Another hungry soul will come, and they will take a bite.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | Re: Peach Follows very awesome poem and i have to say shaking your tree then letting the peach rot is wrong , a peach shouldbe cared for and handled like a fragile thing and should be aprecaited this poem really does show how things should be handled with care and not be abused or used and who ever dosnt care for the peach that falls should be ignored and never spoken to again , infact you should try and catch a peach when it fals after you shake the tree it falls from.
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![]() Credits: 1,805 | Re: Peach Follows Wow that was a really great peom. Kinda different from everything that I have read! It's so touching and with plenty of emotion placed into it just right! Keep up the good work! ![]()
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![]() Credits: 49,619 | Re: Peach Follows A very nice one... very smart and very optimistic... I feel so jelous... I can't seem to write anything and I need something for the POTM!!!! arg! Back to the topic... I really like the fact that you've writen about your username... it's like showing how you are like... and isn't it weird that a username you chose such a long time ago shows how it is today? Mine would be something like "Laura with an s, Laura the shinny, Laura the stupid, Laura the misspelled!" ^^ lol I really want to see more, k? |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,512 | Re: Peach Follows @ Holder... Man, I am so thatnkful for you. I... I have to PM you. @Rikus... Thank you! Im glad you found it original. And appreciate you even taking the time to read it. I really didn't think many would even give this second glance. @Lasura. ... Pish posh! You will create something magnificent, and probably win. Afterall you already have a fanclub.^^ I find it helps to A: look at the other entries B: listen to some music (that always helps me) C: take some quiet time to search your soul. Every soul has something it wants to express. I get the feeling you're a busy girl. Just take the time to listen to yourself.
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