Pensamiento "Thought"

Hola.
Como estas?
Que has echo?
Bueno pues te estoy escribiendo,
Ya es muy noche y no puedo de dejar de pensar en ti.
Sabes?
Pedirle a mi mente que deje de pensar en ti,
Es como pedirle a mi corazon que dejase de latir,
y en verdad es imposible.
Cuando pienso en esos momentos que estoy con tigo,
aunque sean segundos para mi son una eternidad.
Y esos besos que me das,
aunque sean falsedad
Cuando te recuerdo me emosiono,
porque para mi son realidad.
Recordar tu ojos, la suabidad de tu piel, la delicadesa de tus manos
y el perfume de tu cuerpo,
No creo que exista mujer mas perfecta.
Ma yo equibocado estoy,
Tan solo es un pensamiento,
Con el tiempo se borrara.
Mas cada dia me sorprendo
De lo bella que eres en verdad.

Hi.
How are u?
Well I'm writing this to u.
Is alread late and I can not stop thinking about u.
U know?
Asking my mind to stop thinking about u
Is like asking my harth to stop pumping,
and is really impossible.
When I remember those moments with u,
Doesn't matter if is just for few seconds
For me is an eternity.
Those kisses that u give me,
Doesn't matter if u are faking it'
When i remember u I go crazy'
Beacause for me are real.
To remember your eyes, the softness of your skin, your delicated hands,
and the perfume of your body.
I don't think there is another woman like u.
But im wrong
It is only a thought,
But every day i'm surprise
of thebeauty you have in reality.

I hope u like it. My friend write it I just translate it.

This is really good!!!
I like the part written in Spanish and then you can see the translation.....that is really neat!!!!
Great job!!!

Thanks took me time to tranlate it because my english is not well develope

well then I can help you in English and you can help me in Spanish.....perfecto!!!!!!!!!!

Lol ^^ this is nice... :) very nice indeed.. ^^ but kinda too general.. but the spanish made it sound more beautiful.. :p

keep it up ^^

I really, really love the starting. And every thing else is very nice too- nice descriptions and rhythm and so on, I enjoyed reading it ^^ Your friend has done a nice work ^^