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Reply With QuoteReally does a good job of describing the experience. But, what about the tunnel? Maybe that was just such a big part of it for me, but the people did seemed to be the focus for you.
"The people" might just be the ones
who hear us when we pray.
"The people" may not be beings
that could use the title "they".
Too big to be generalized.
"The people" are a force.
"The people" want to show us all
a different path, and course.
A different dimension
exists outside our bubble.
But, knowledge of this outer realm
can leave one feeling troubled.
"The people" know, our simple minds
Prevent our eyes to see...
The truth that seems to be revealed
Holding in the Sally D.
If the universe were a book...
..."reality", is just one page.
Your truth becomes a lie...
...If you've found diviner's sage.
Is it okay to know this much?
Feeble humanity's debating.
"The Man" can't keep "The people" down.
"The people" are still waiting.
... Not Ever Again...
Really does a good job of describing the experience. But, what about the tunnel? Maybe that was just such a big part of it for me, but the people did seemed to be the focus for you.
"Don't judge my book by its cover, because my story is just as f*cked up as any other."
-Eyedea
Looks like you're gonna have ta write a poem about the tunnel. It already has the potential to blow my poem out of the water. In fact I don't think my poem describes my experience at all, just.... the purpose of the people... the concept. And I threw in a little Salvia contraversy.
... Not Ever Again...
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