Wow. This poem is certainly not the usual love, depressed or hating. It's actually happy! U don't find many poems like this around anymore... i guess people are more into the angsty sad vybes now. It is not too long, has a nice rhyming scheme and is interesting how u looked at how the people may be dressed for.
Random statement: I'd love to go Tokyo! The biggest cities where i'm from, u can drive around in a couple hours...provided there's no traffic :-(