yay!!!!!!!!!!! im making a poem. not fuc*ing emo either!!
The people in my life are always there
from when i do wrong to when i do right
i try to act like an angel and be polite
but im not that type of girl.
im sweet yet sassy
im ghetto yet classy.
the people in my life help me along the way,
from ashley, to tiffinay to even people down in the A
i have friends here and friends there
i got friends just about everywhere.
but the ones i love are here.
from my sisters, fma to lost but found
to my one true love who i know i have for life
they help me no matter what shit im in, wrong or right
they help me do anything and everything
they help make my day bright
they help put a smile on my face
even when im feeling bitchy.
so to the people in my life i wanna thank,
becuz i love you all and here in my heart
,with racheal, your here to stay
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
*Sniff* that as a wonderful poem I loved it! ^^ I don't think there is much to correct here no spellin mistakes, grammer is ok some mistakes (I don't know I am pretty bad in this area) and everything else is fine. It was a great poem thanks for includin me sis. ^_^
Thanks lifeforce! (:
that was awesome Princess, you put feeling into it, i hope to se more of yor work later on.
I like the way the emotion flows from every line of this poem! I really don't see to many things that you need to correct, but it is a wonderful poem!
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