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    Lightbulb Perception

    Living in a world that is undaunted by time
    Life spins its silky web creating true beauty
    As our minds embark on these cerebral vacations
    One wonders what mind excavations can be dug up


    History presents itself in all of our lives leaving footprints
    Litted with broken glass of shatterd dreams unrealized
    Hope becomes a fraction of how reality can be so frail
    Hidden upon our final drafts in societies english class


    Every ounce of our work/being is shown through heart
    Motivation to exceed and expound predetermined expectations
    Opens up limitations that have no bounds to be grasped
    Freedom finally being released from it's caged confinement


    Allowing ideas to begin flowing as smoothly as water
    Truth becomes welcomed in the hearts and minds of few
    Understanding that when the rich wage war it's the poor who die
    Finally realizing that my voice is expressed through words



    I titled this perception simply because I used the perceptions of real people so each stanza is someone elses view of life. Comments and critiques are welcomed.

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    Re: Perception

    Wow!! This is amamzing Fox!! I'm glad 2 see ya writtin again, been waitin 4ever 2 see somethin new of your's lol I really loved how you used ur words in this. It really spoke with such truth and emotions. I loved it!! Can't wait 2 see what ya come up with next!! Keep writtin kk. ^__^
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    Re: Perception

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Wow!! This is amamzing Fox!! I'm glad 2 see ya writtin again, been waitin 4ever 2 see somethin new of your's lol I really loved how you used ur words in this. It really spoke with such truth and emotions. I loved it!! Can't wait 2 see what ya come up with next!! Keep writtin kk. ^__^
    Appreciate the critique Shini! I just wanted to try something a little different but not really stray away from my free verse style. I meet a lot of interesting people on a daily basis and to hear their views on life, simply captivated me and made me want to write this poem only as means to make people think. While I do think this poem is rough around the edges. I tired my best to use there thoughts and put them into to words that we all can understand. Thank you for taking the time to read this and tell me what you thought of it. Oh!, and my apologies for taking so long to write a new one. Lol!

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    Re: Perception

    It's been a while since you've written anything,but what you've come up with here is great! I felt alot of different emotions while I was reading it. Bravo bro! Keep up the good work.
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