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    Perfect Conquest

    From my pain...
    Births your sense of peace.
    The death of this
    gives your mind's sweet release.

    Your distance
    solidifies your absence.
    Change must occur.
    This naturally happens.

    Wayward attractions
    to the pain on my face.
    They love me, defaced.
    You could be replaced.

    Time's easy to waste.
    This pain is persistent.
    I'm your passing thought.
    Gone in an instant.

    ...It kills me to know it.
    Slow death, as time passes.
    Still, broken hearts,
    attracting the masses.

    To own me,
    is to harness my pain.
    Get lost in my storm,
    Or dance in my rain.

    If I am to be prized,
    in such sadistic contest...
    Hurting me only made me
    the perfect conquest.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Perfect Conquest

    their sweet release can truly be a 2and death because
    they think they can just live how they want and still be OK
    with how your feeling and with the hell that you live in , there really
    isn't a silver lining behind every dark cloud when it comes to trying
    to stop something that has a mind of its own...

    thats what i got from the poem its a really good one i like a lot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Perfect Conquest

    Wow i was in a good mood but now i'm depressed.
    This is a lovely poem.
    I seem to me like she at the begin doesn't like what is happaing to her but by the end she just accept it she just a prize or that just what pop in my head after i read it.
    It could be completely wrong.

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