Perfect Day

Foamy sea water crashing into rocks
Shiny seaweed lingers on it tops

Cool fresh breezes
run through my face
Soaring seagulls flying
with such grace

Clear blue skys , a sun shining bright
Signals a perfect day
Watching such beauty out by the bay
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hehe I know it might of sounded silly, but I like my cute silly little poem :nod:

I think this is charming and somewhat elegant in its brevity. Nothing wrong with staying short. A lot of people want to keep adding lines when they have a perfectly good poem and ruin it. This is good.