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Reply With QuoteI think this is charming and somewhat elegant in its brevity. Nothing wrong with staying short. A lot of people want to keep adding lines when they have a perfectly good poem and ruin it. This is good.
Foamy sea water crashing into rocks
Shiny seaweed lingers on it tops
Cool fresh breezes
run through my face
Soaring seagulls flying
with such grace
Clear blue skys , a sun shining bright
Signals a perfect day
Watching such beauty out by the bay
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hehe I know it might of sounded silly, but I like my cute silly little poem
Last edited by Leslie the forgotten; Jul 09, 2009 at 07:50 PM.
I think this is charming and somewhat elegant in its brevity. Nothing wrong with staying short. A lot of people want to keep adding lines when they have a perfectly good poem and ruin it. This is good.
Leslie the forgotten (Jul 06, 2009)
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