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Sep 19, 2006, 07:35 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Between the reaches of ones heart, mind and soul...where only a small light lingers.
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 Credits: 770 | Perfect Insanity <O: heres a short one, comments please> Perfect Insanity Thou tormented mind is torn asunder Twisted and disfigured beyond repair Toiling in madness, striving to live Lost in your own parallel world Your schizophrenia opposites to the other You live one by day, another by night But alas the torment is your own device You created them both from your shattered life The insanity will slowly decay What's left of your mind today The walls are closing all about you Your life has lost its meaning You pity your self when no one else does Your shattered life has become my perfect insanity
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Sep 19, 2006, 09:14 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 5,581 | Re: Perfect Insanity very cool style of writing here and i love it i have yet to see anyone else write like this since i have been here,and its true you make your own devices and it droves yoy insane,but if you can make the devie you can destroy it as well ,but you have to have the will to do it. aweome othello
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Sep 20, 2006, 08:59 PM
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 Newbie | Re: Perfect Insanity I kept wanting it to rhyme right up until the very end. But It didn't. And Im a better person for it. I liked the pseudo old-english feel to it as well. It makes it feel far more epic. I am a fan of all things epic.  Kudos! |
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Sep 20, 2006, 10:40 PM
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| Otaku  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Oxnard is a great by the beach place
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Credits: 8,971 | Re: Perfect Insanity Perfect insanity - great oxymoron shattered life does despair My schizophrenia almost made a gonner of me My tortured existence however made me stronger since it gave me access to psychological tools and professional doctors who gave me antipsychotic pills. I'm coping now but zyprexa and prozac make me oversleep great poem. I can relate to every word. I'm not bipolar though. just paranoid most of the time. Hope you make more poems -- they serve social justice methinks I like your "don't be a mother before a wife" poem too!! Who is your muse? |
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