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    Perfect Insanity

    <O: heres a short one, comments please>

    Perfect Insanity


    Thou tormented mind is torn asunder
    Twisted and disfigured beyond repair
    Toiling in madness, striving to live
    Lost in your own parallel world
    Your schizophrenia opposites to the other
    You live one by day, another by night
    But alas the torment is your own device
    You created them both from your shattered life
    The insanity will slowly decay
    What's left of your mind today
    The walls are closing all about you
    Your life has lost its meaning
    You pity your self when no one else does
    Your shattered life has become my perfect insanity

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    Re: Perfect Insanity

    very cool style of writing here and i love it
    i have yet to see anyone else write like this
    since i have been here,and its true you make your
    own devices and it droves yoy insane,but if you can
    make the devie you can destroy it as well ,but you have
    to have the will to do it. aweome othello
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Perfect Insanity

    I like it. Its a cool poem

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    Re: Perfect Insanity

    I kept wanting it to rhyme right up until the very end. But It didn't. And Im a better person for it.

    I liked the pseudo old-english feel to it as well. It makes it feel far more epic. I am a fan of all things epic.

    Kudos!

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    Re: Perfect Insanity

    This is really... deep..

    -idolizes- ... Bleh.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Perfect Insanity

    Perfect insanity - great oxymoron
    shattered life does despair
    My schizophrenia almost made a gonner of me
    My tortured existence however made me stronger
    since it gave me access to psychological tools
    and professional doctors who gave me antipsychotic pills.
    I'm coping now but zyprexa and prozac make me oversleep
    great poem. I can relate to every word. I'm not bipolar though.
    just paranoid most of the time.
    Hope you make more poems -- they serve social justice methinks
    I like your "don't be a mother before a wife" poem too!!
    Who is your muse?

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