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Old Sep 19, 2006, 07:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Perfect Insanity

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Perfect Insanity


Thou tormented mind is torn asunder
Twisted and disfigured beyond repair
Toiling in madness, striving to live
Lost in your own parallel world
Your schizophrenia opposites to the other
You live one by day, another by night
But alas the torment is your own device
You created them both from your shattered life
The insanity will slowly decay
What's left of your mind today
The walls are closing all about you
Your life has lost its meaning
You pity your self when no one else does
Your shattered life has become my perfect insanity
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Old Sep 19, 2006, 09:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Perfect Insanity

very cool style of writing here and i love it
i have yet to see anyone else write like this
since i have been here,and its true you make your
own devices and it droves yoy insane,but if you can
make the devie you can destroy it as well ,but you have
to have the will to do it. aweome othello
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Old Sep 19, 2006, 10:39 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Perfect Insanity

I like it. Its a cool poem
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Old Sep 20, 2006, 08:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Perfect Insanity

I kept wanting it to rhyme right up until the very end. But It didn't. And Im a better person for it.

I liked the pseudo old-english feel to it as well. It makes it feel far more epic. I am a fan of all things epic.

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Old Sep 20, 2006, 10:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Perfect Insanity

This is really... deep..

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Re: Perfect Insanity

Perfect insanity - great oxymoron
shattered life does despair
My schizophrenia almost made a gonner of me
My tortured existence however made me stronger
since it gave me access to psychological tools
and professional doctors who gave me antipsychotic pills.
I'm coping now but zyprexa and prozac make me oversleep
great poem. I can relate to every word. I'm not bipolar though.
just paranoid most of the time.
Hope you make more poems -- they serve social justice methinks
I like your "don't be a mother before a wife" poem too!!
Who is your muse?
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