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    The perfect passion

    My thoughts of you they drift,
    my heart always pound when we talk,
    never telling you how i feel when you
    pass,oh how i wish i could with how
    every moment passes.

    My feeling's for you they are real
    not like the kids out side playing there
    childish games,how i wish i cold hold you
    as the stars above dance for us ,like player/s
    on a stage.

    The night;s finaly here as ouw hearts
    become one ,and our soul's intertwine
    like a fire around a burning wick letting no
    barrier come between us as we kiss and i
    let loose the hell's of passion for this night.

    By morning sun our kiss barly through
    i regret releasing you if only time could
    freeze this moment then my heart would be truly
    content.

    i did this poem for somone very specail and awesome
    and hope they like it alot . and for the words i feel
    they represent feeling's most hide when they love
    somone and they let slip throgh there fingers
    never knowing what true love could be if they would
    open there heart to the one they truly love.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The perfect passion

    A classic poem! I dunno who the person is XP but still very nice use of words, please do keep it up

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    Re: The perfect passion

    THat was a lovely peom Holder! it made me all blush and happy lol. It is very sweet and beautiful. I love it^^ and this is one i will have to keep with me. hehe. i simply have no words left to say but wow. ^^

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    Re: The perfect passion

    that poem was totaly amazing
    beautiful loving words
    that was very well done and great
    keep it up
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    Re: The perfect passion

    That was really beautiful. Almost made me teary because I know i'm the only one to truly understand it and I do. I really loved your poem Chris. It was very meaningful and touching.
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    Re: The perfect passion

    thank i am glad everyone liked it and thanks julias for likeing it so much
    though yur peoms are way better than mine

    and leanna glad you liked it aslo im suprised you cred but thansl for underrstanding it so well
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The perfect passion

    very beautiful holderofdarkchalice. nice words and nice emotions that go along with it,.

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    Re: The perfect passion

    *Tears sliding down my face~ I love it, I feel the same way.
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