Alone in my room...A sorrwed heart inside my shattered soul
I gazed upon the shinning horizon of starts and moon that gives me a little happiness
Forcefully seeing it a breakthrough tells me to sleep in my bed of silence
I cried many tears like crystal,rolling down my cheeks
Illusive chant of great pain and silence slowly crept up in my sorrowed heart
For the pain of my heart is engulfed by agony and sadness
Sudden failuer of love is keeping my silence and sad
Silence Silence...The word the filled my whole room of agonies and pain
I gazed again in the shinninh horizon of stars and moon and this time
A glimmer of hope shone upon my saddened face
Waiting and Urging for hope,I stare in the way of hope to break my shattered soul!
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I was reading a book of poems and after I read a one line which gave me inspiraition to write this poem(I actually worte this one with many demons running and chatting around me!)...
Please give it a feedback aobout it though..
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
Sadness... makes you feel empty doesn't it? And then sometimes you'd rather feel empty than feel the pain, repetitive as it is...feeling like it will never leave.
But it has to get better at sometime, even if it feels like it'll take forever.
And the heart will never really let go...it will always create hope out of nothing.
Life's short so have a laugh about it
receiverofhell (Jun 13, 2009)
very good poem i think being alone does make one
sad and regret thingsbut at the same time youget your strength
from it as well i got this from the poem .
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
receiverofhell (Jun 13, 2009)
Thanks both of you ....This poem actually just came out of my mind when I suddenly remember one thing that kept me silwnt for one minute
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
never knew you were poetic. good poem. we all felt at one point in our life that we were alone. no matter how grim your situation may be there is always a" glimmer of hope".
receiverofhell (Jun 18, 2009)
I either knew how to make poem..after I have in AO! for nearly 5 months I think I 'v e got enough inspiration to do somep oems^^never knew you were poetic. good poem. we all felt at one point in our life that we were alone. no matter how grim your situation may be there is always a" glimmer of hope".and I have a continuation of this one^^
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
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