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    The Performer

    I'm on my knees,
    My hair's a mess,
    Clothes are worn out,
    My eyes are bloodshot,
    Sure as hell lost my way,
    But I know I aint letting you have shot at me.

    My eyes snap up,
    My hands are a blur,
    The next thing you know is,
    I'm flying off the rail,
    The guns I hold kicking back,
    They're my soul reapers,
    The screams fill senses,
    As i watch you fall,
    You aint the best,
    Die like the rest.

    The familiar sirens are coming,
    This is it,
    This is my last encore,
    My final performance,
    Tonight i can rest,
    Just one more performance,
    And I'm done,
    The fireworks are kicking off,
    The cars are flying as their wheels are shredded,
    The rest stop and get out.

    I eye them with glee,
    Welcome to the show,
    For my first trick,
    Two men die at the sound thunder,
    They panic and go aslunder,
    Some fire back,
    I get hit in the shoulder,
    I'm firing back,
    Their helmets shattered,
    Such a shame,
    Wish you stay longer,
    Flying like a bird,
    Raining death down on you,
    As i land,
    Men fly and fall,
    This is not my final performance.

    There is silence once more,
    I'm on my knees again,
    It starts to rain,
    Maybe that'll help ease my pain.
    I dunno, I'm just a performer.

    well i jus felt like writing this piece with no intention at all so it's open to interpretations. Tell me wut u think.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: The Performer

    snaps for blade!!!*snaps* deep. like it.

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    Re: The Performer

    Ah.....The urge for mayhem and chaos...........Lies within everyone......
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    Re: The Performer

    Good detail, and it portrays a significant ammount of feeling. Good job keep it up!

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    Re: The Performer

    mmm well i didnt know wut i was feeling then wen i jus typed it into the AO new thread..........

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: The Performer

    i liked it- good attention to detail- keep up the good work!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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