Like it, I love it. You made a point but you didn't get obnoxious. This is a great poem with a rhyme scheme and everything. You killed and leaved. You may want to check out the Poem Of The Month Competition. http://www.animeonline.net/f117/
Eternal darkness without a limit,
No soul can withstand the pain in it
Struggling to find the will to fight,
It's hard without a single ray of light
Running aimlessly in the cold,soft sand
Somewhere nearby a river crosses the land
I am lost,my life is done,
It seems that I must be the Perishing One.
A poem,I wrote a long ago
Hope y'all like it![]()
Like it, I love it. You made a point but you didn't get obnoxious. This is a great poem with a rhyme scheme and everything. You killed and leaved. You may want to check out the Poem Of The Month Competition. http://www.animeonline.net/f117/
Thank you very much beast
Will post others aswell,I have many,I like to write,altough I'm not that good at it
But I'm trying to get better and better
Thanks again![]()
Thanks so much
It means a lot that people like what I write.I'm gonna try my best.
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.
Well,not that long,when I have some inspiration,I write down what I think or feel
First,I just wrote down my thoughts,then I tried to add some rhymes to it.I will post more of my poems,so you can see what I get when I write something:P![]()
kingmustang (Apr 20, 2010)
Well, if you need assistance with a poem ask me or beast or any other Poet of whom posts in this section.I'm sure any one of them would be glad to assist as long as they receive proper credit in your poem.
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