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    Permasmile

    -Permasmile-

    I'm not suppose to smile.
    Not around this time of year.
    It's suppose to be sad and lonely,
    mixed with a daily, single tear.

    I know what your thinking,
    "Oh here goes another sad write."
    But I'm too freakin' happy,
    to be writing sadness tonight.

    There is one person,
    for whom I cannot frown around.
    So everytime she logs on,
    I have my frowns hit the ground.

    She's not even an infatuation,
    or a love or what have you.
    She's a simple little friend of mine,
    who likes what I like to do.

    She's someone that i thought,
    I'd never hear from.
    Now I've made friends of enemies,
    and put away want was undone.

    I've found love,
    in the form I truely needed.
    People that like me for me,
    and the others have conceaded.

    I'm not going to stop smiling,
    and I better finish this quick.
    Cause if I don't finish now,
    She'll probably poke me with a stick.

    We laugh about nothing,
    and she loves the words I type.
    So i get on when I can,
    and take down the poetic hype.

    she lets me know,
    that her love of my works is true.
    And now I have to finish my sandwhich,
    so I can give that to her too.


    White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Permasmile

    Awww!!!!! That was so cute!!!!! I wonder who that girl is... And yeah, I've noticed that you're quite happy while posting this poem... Anyways, I'm glad that you finally wrote a poem that's happy. ^^ See ya. Hope to rread more of your works!

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    Re: Permasmile

    Awww... that is super duper cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ Really loving it and it makes me happy to see people who are made happy by other people, makes the whole world seem a bit more sun-shiny ^^ and I'm always glad to see happy poems from people of whom I've read only sad ones...

    This is somethign I'd love to get *giggles* It's really nice... Nothing to say tha I didn't like- it's very nice ^^ Nice work!!!

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    im really glad you havent stopped writing.
    amazing as always--love being the main focus
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    Re: Permasmile

    Just a few grammar/Spelling mistakes I've noticed. ( One or two )

    But otherwise you were quite the rhythemist, and I enjoyed the smile filled fun of your poetic journey. >.>

    It made me smile, it's been a while since I smiled at a poem. Which is good.

    It was simple yet it explained it all.

    Though it was sorta random too, but I didn't mind much.

    Good job.



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