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Old Dec 13, 2007, 11:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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-Permasmile-

I'm not suppose to smile.
Not around this time of year.
It's suppose to be sad and lonely,
mixed with a daily, single tear.

I know what your thinking,
"Oh here goes another sad write."
But I'm too freakin' happy,
to be writing sadness tonight.

There is one person,
for whom I cannot frown around.
So everytime she logs on,
I have my frowns hit the ground.

She's not even an infatuation,
or a love or what have you.
She's a simple little friend of mine,
who likes what I like to do.

She's someone that i thought,
I'd never hear from.
Now I've made friends of enemies,
and put away want was undone.

I've found love,
in the form I truely needed.
People that like me for me,
and the others have conceaded.

I'm not going to stop smiling,
and I better finish this quick.
Cause if I don't finish now,
She'll probably poke me with a stick.

We laugh about nothing,
and she loves the words I type.
So i get on when I can,
and take down the poetic hype.

she lets me know,
that her love of my works is true.
And now I have to finish my sandwhich,
so I can give that to her too.


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Old Dec 14, 2007, 04:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Permasmile

Awww!!!!! That was so cute!!!!! I wonder who that girl is... And yeah, I've noticed that you're quite happy while posting this poem... Anyways, I'm glad that you finally wrote a poem that's happy. ^^ See ya. Hope to rread more of your works!
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Awww... that is super duper cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ Really loving it and it makes me happy to see people who are made happy by other people, makes the whole world seem a bit more sun-shiny ^^ and I'm always glad to see happy poems from people of whom I've read only sad ones...

This is somethign I'd love to get *giggles* It's really nice... Nothing to say tha I didn't like- it's very nice ^^ Nice work!!!
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im really glad you havent stopped writing.
amazing as always--love being the main focus
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Re: Permasmile

Just a few grammar/Spelling mistakes I've noticed. ( One or two )

But otherwise you were quite the rhythemist, and I enjoyed the smile filled fun of your poetic journey. >.>

It made me smile, it's been a while since I smiled at a poem. Which is good.

It was simple yet it explained it all.

Though it was sorta random too, but I didn't mind much.

Good job.


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