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    Phantom Pain

    Phantom Pain


    all around, the shadows gather.
    My dread grows as the stroke of death falls against my naked soul.
    It slays me, and darkly my
    essence drips
    to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
    In pain I call your name
    while death hovers close.
    Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon my wailing eyes.

    This is my Hell

    Tanks zyta

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    Re: Phantom Pain

    Nice poem hiei9957! It's short, sweet, and straight to the point! Keep up the good work!

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    Re: Phantom Pain

    Wow... short, "sweet", straight to the point and very decriptive.
    Keep it up! ^_^

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