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| Banned | phoney they all laugh at him as he sits and cries for which him and his feelings they all dispise but theirs his one friend who he suspects only lies and he doesnt believe him when he says theyll stay friends till he dies hes bringing himself back togethers wiping away his tears and all the depressing thoughts in his mind he clears every one is gone now now he is very lonely he hears his freind talking and realizes hes a phoney |
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Moving right along.... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,512 | Re: phoney Wow. This brought back many very painful memories for me. I remeber when I felt like no one loved or cared about me. And everyone I thought to be my "friends" had just left me in the cold. Just so they could mingle with others who hurt me. Well , before I start to cry I better just sum this up. You did a great job putting true feelings into this.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 10,360 | Re: phoney Pfft, it got kinda confusing for me but I still ending up liking it. The titles (or who makes the thing) are what draw me in. Your title stabbed me in the eye with a Sharpie when I wasn't looking. Love where this went, you actually managed to close it with 'style.' Use proper grammar though, many people will blab at you about it. Overall you did wonderfully. (for which him and his, that line made me der)
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