I do! I like the way it flows and the subject is well presented. It made me happy. I wish I had more pictures to look back at.
photo
pictures captured in time
so many memories
so many good times
just looking back
makes me cry
because i have to say
goodbye
so here is something to
ease the pain
a photo to see
what we both gained
well do u guys like it?
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I do! I like the way it flows and the subject is well presented. It made me happy. I wish I had more pictures to look back at.
great job with it .
love the is it flow .
it brought tears to my eyes
love it
I like this poem alot it reminds me of alot of things that i would probably wouldnt like to remember but it makes me think alot about how precious memorys can be
I love it!!!!!!!!! It was just so amazing really!!!!! This just brings me back at the past of mine......So YEAH!!!!! I really do hope to see more!!!!!![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
well its short
lol, nah its
good i liked
it, keep up the
good work
thanks i like it too. i wrote it when my best friend moved away. she and i knew each other since i moved to the us. so yea and thanks for the wonderful replies!!
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Very good.Ummm 1 tip tho.If you were trying to ryhem every section Time and Times,not the best ryhem.But very good.
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