photo

ryomakurosaki · Jul 10, 2007, 08:19 AM

photo

pictures captured in time
so many memories
so many good times

just looking back
makes me cry
because i have to say
goodbye

so here is something to
ease the pain

a photo to see
what we both gained

well do u guys like it?

bratling · Jul 10, 2007, 08:32 AM

I do! I like the way it flows and the subject is well presented. It made me happy. I wish I had more pictures to look back at.

chrystalann2004 · Jul 10, 2007, 08:40 AM

great job with it .
love the is it flow .
it brought tears to my eyes
love it

runebearer00 · Jul 10, 2007, 08:48 AM

I like this poem alot it reminds me of alot of things that i would probably wouldnt like to remember but it makes me think alot about how precious memorys can be

KuwiRules145 · Jul 10, 2007, 10:05 AM

I love it!!!!!!!!! It was just so amazing really!!!!! This just brings me back at the past of mine......So YEAH!!!!! I really do hope to see more!!!!!

ME2LOL · Jul 10, 2007, 10:08 AM

well its short
lol, nah its
good i liked
it, keep up the
good work

ryomakurosaki · Jul 10, 2007, 07:17 PM

thanks i like it too. i wrote it when my best friend moved away. she and i knew each other since i moved to the us. so yea and thanks for the wonderful replies!!

Little negi sensei · Jul 20, 2007, 03:32 PM

Very good.Ummm 1 tip tho.If you were trying to ryhem every section Time and Times,not the best ryhem.But very good.

sangogirl · Jul 20, 2007, 05:49 PM

i really liked it its sweet and it has a good vibe to it. love it. hope you write more.

Jul 10, 2007, 08:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
ryomakurosaki Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play Posts: 270 Thanks: 17 Thanked 28 Times in 24 Posts Credits: 10,702	photo photo pictures captured in time so many memories so many good times just looking back makes me cry because i have to say goodbye so here is something to ease the pain a photo to see what we both gained well do u guys like it? __________________ Can't believe I could think that he would just follow me everywhere I go I just wrestle with you in my dreams and wake up making love to my pillow Videos of the week(updated next on June 15):http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjAsrwW9ptU
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bratling Sugar sweet poison Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 516 Thanks: 0 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 12,880	Re: photo I do! I like the way it flows and the subject is well presented. It made me happy. I wish I had more pictures to look back at.
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chrystalann2004 Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, U.T. Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 1,633	Re: photo great job with it . love the is it flow . it brought tears to my eyes love it
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Jul 10, 2007, 08:48 AM	#4 (permalink)
runebearer00 Newbie Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: The realm of Darkness Posts: 42 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,060	Re: photo I like this poem alot it reminds me of alot of things that i would probably wouldnt like to remember but it makes me think alot about how precious memorys can be __________________ *In the Darkness i walk alone..........* sig by Akura13
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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: photo I love it!!!!!!!!! It was just so amazing really!!!!! This just brings me back at the past of mine......So YEAH!!!!! I really do hope to see more!!!!! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Jul 10, 2007, 10:08 AM	#6 (permalink)
ME2LOL Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 86 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 72	Re: photo well its short lol, nah its good i liked it, keep up the good work
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Jul 10, 2007, 07:17 PM	#7 (permalink)
ryomakurosaki Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play Posts: 270 Thanks: 17 Thanked 28 Times in 24 Posts Credits: 10,702	Re: photo thanks i like it too. i wrote it when my best friend moved away. she and i knew each other since i moved to the us. so yea and thanks for the wonderful replies!! __________________ Can't believe I could think that he would just follow me everywhere I go I just wrestle with you in my dreams and wake up making love to my pillow Videos of the week(updated next on June 15):http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjAsrwW9ptU
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Jul 20, 2007, 03:32 PM	#8 (permalink)
Little negi sensei Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 360 Thanks: 17 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 1,295	Re: photo Very good.Ummm 1 tip tho.If you were trying to ryhem every section Time and Times,not the best ryhem.But very good. __________________
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Jul 20, 2007, 05:49 PM	#9 (permalink)
sangogirl Otaku Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: TEXAS Posts: 373 Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,173	Re: photo i really liked it its sweet and it has a good vibe to it. love it. hope you write more. __________________
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