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    Pick-me-Up

    Lookin' outside my door,
    to find the heel of inspiration.
    Where the rainbow meets the sky.

    And I'm not sure what's constant
    but I know one thing for sure.
    I won't go without a fight.

    It's in me to say
    the one thing is for sure
    and that's there's always hope.

    Even when the lights are dim
    or the clouds are gathering;
    hope is a candle flame.

    Flicker, flicker
    so fragile and losable
    to a weary soul.

    But just as easy findable
    to whoever asks'
    its favor.

    And I won't go gently
    nor with a smile,
    because flicker, baby, that's just denial.

    ---
    baby, just believe in the stars and all your wildest dreams might come true.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Pick-me-Up

    Y'know.... Its so funny, I've been thinking a lot about hope. And what is the value of keeping hope, if its possible you may never get what you're hoping for.... I mean, what good is hope, if hope is all you have in the end?

    I guess Im a weary soul who may just let her flame blow it. But, as you said in this poem.... Hope finds its way back easily when I need the light to get through. Got a light?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Pick-me-Up

    Very cool. I thought the comparison of hope to a candle flame was depicted. It's not that long, but I think it's still has quality and content.

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    Re: Pick-me-Up

    well you all know, darlings, that words are words;
    and there in you to create,
    so just think of all the possibilities.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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