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Reply With Quotewell thats a good use of ryhme and you have very short stanzas which to me makes the poem seem more faster
Pick Up Lines Between Love & Hate To feel your
lips againt
mine
one last
time,
So I can
drown
with a
frown,
For each broken
heart
that has fallen
apart
This last bit of
feeling
I've spent
stealing
to finally
feel
what used
to be so
real
As my lungs
begin to
fill
I need to live
still
To pick you
up from your
fall
as you begin to
call
Without a second
thought
and every battle
that I
fought
As I keep going
Under
forever listening
to the
Thunder...
You wouldn't know a good thing
if it came up and slit your throat
well thats a good use of ryhme and you have very short stanzas which to me makes the poem seem more faster
OH WOW SUch an AMAZING POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! First it's all love but it turns to hate!!! Thats such amazing!!! I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
that was such as a nice poem ...i like the way you writed in short sentences like what aeonking say to make it faster ....hope to see more from you ...keep up....
Foolish beating
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