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Reply With QuoteIt's nice, the third stanza threw me off rhythm though but I still liked it
I can see it
I can feel it
It's so close
I can touch it
Death is so close
Close to my heart
Close to my soul
I'm so tempted to let go
Just when I'm about to
A picture flashes in my mind
I feel something in my heart
And it's pulling me away
I see the light
It's the life
I've never had
And now I'm saved
It's because of you
You're love saved me
It saved me from myself
And I'll love you always.....
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Yay another poem by the great Akura!!!
I'm jk I'm pathetic anyways plz post thnxs!^^
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It's nice, the third stanza threw me off rhythm though but I still liked it
yeah I know I couldn't think of anything else so yeah anyways thank you very much I'm glad you liked it!^^
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really great one ...
so cute i like it ....so this the pic of the love ...I love this pic if it's real..^^
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Thanks for likeing my poem xxoxx!!^^ my pic of love is and always will be kakashi-sama woohoo!!!!! lol anyways thank you for posting!^^
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