i like how you reflected
your mom and how she helped you
no matter if she was sick.you know
its like moms sacrafice everything for you
not even thinking about it. this was an awsome poem
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i like how you reflected
your mom and how she helped you
no matter if she was sick.you know
its like moms sacrafice everything for you
not even thinking about it. this was an awsome poem
-sigh-
Capitilization! Oh! How thee misses when the world capitilized correctly. Everything was going fairly well until I hit the third stanza. I was left yawning and wondering when will it end?
I love your use of words. The ending just needs to be jazzed up a bit.
sad to say, i agree, with what u say about the 3rd stanza....Quote:
Originally Posted by Kasai
but i dont capitalize...only to place emphasis on words
I understand that. Try another way to emphasize a word? Perhaps fiddle around with spacing? Breaks? There are many literary devices for you to use.
Thanks I will consider these ideas for my future writing practices
:thumb: Nice, a very interesting poem. Great job.
Awww... YOU LOVE YOUR MOM! THAT'S SO CUTE!
no but really, it is a nice read! Just don't forget that when she yells at you!
yeah i liked the poem and all, but could you try to be a little more (in)considerate with that type of stuff. it was good to me also anyways.