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Reply With QuoteWow.... wat a vocab, lol. I like I like. Impressive work Pig, I love the description and the atmopshere built around the poem. Awwww... Piggy loves his mommy, lol. ^^
Keep up the good work.
title: mother mother
where would i be, eight years only,
a clean plate, a clean slate, you've given me,
hopes you've planted, and success you've dreamed,
your only precious, your treasured possession,
willed me to be more, not two or three, but four
walking before me, you stood a mirror,
reflecting respect, taking the hard steps,
you laid the stones, i merely followed, stumbling,
but not alone, never fearful,
your footsteps engraved, one whole,
my mind, my body, my soul
you fell ill, you stood up,
you are pounded, you are weathered,
yet you endured, we, still together
many years you've led, now I'm finally ahead,
your tree stands tall, your aspirations now reality,
your only student, now graduated,
grateful and indebted, for your sacrifices
o~Piggy-san~o
Wow.... wat a vocab, lol. I like I like. Impressive work Pig, I love the description and the atmopshere built around the poem. Awwww... Piggy loves his mommy, lol. ^^
Keep up the good work.
WHAT THE FUDGE!!!!
awww.... that's a really touching poem piggy-chan... ^^ now that you've graduated, it's a really awesome gift for your mom.... *sniffs* Pam likes it very much... lol... keep it up.... ^-^ byeeeee~!
"Deviously Revamped."
This is your best poetry yet Piggy! ^^
This is my favourite bit, about how the respect is reflected in the use of a mirror, original!walking before me, you stood a mirror,
reflecting respect, taking the hard steps,
I don't think there were any spelling mistakes woo hoo!!
Its great how you appriciate your mother and wrote this poem, and even though i've said it, congrats again on graduating!! ^^
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
Thank you Fudge, Pam, and Kerry,. Much love to all mothers,
SCORE!! Another masterpiece....... meh? in my opinion probably not ur best work... but its great !!! ^_^
*tear* I love mommy too, lol.
Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
I almost cryed! Where did all of this come from. You should work on making a book. I can't believe how well together put it was. Like it was always that way. Already some kind of anthem. I like it alot!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
Thanks Cere and Myssy
@Myssy: Me? a book??? lol...these are not worthy to be put in a book. If i had something like a book, it would have pictures of Myssy inside,
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