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    Pig Poetry #4

    title: mother mother

    where would i be, eight years only,
    a clean plate, a clean slate, you've given me,
    hopes you've planted, and success you've dreamed,
    your only precious, your treasured possession,
    willed me to be more, not two or three, but four

    walking before me, you stood a mirror,
    reflecting respect, taking the hard steps,
    you laid the stones, i merely followed, stumbling,
    but not alone, never fearful,
    your footsteps engraved, one whole,
    my mind, my body, my soul

    you fell ill, you stood up,
    you are pounded, you are weathered,
    yet you endured, we, still together
    many years you've led, now I'm finally ahead,
    your tree stands tall, your aspirations now reality,
    your only student, now graduated,
    grateful and indebted, for your sacrifices

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pig Poetry #4

    Wow.... wat a vocab, lol. I like I like. Impressive work Pig, I love the description and the atmopshere built around the poem. Awwww... Piggy loves his mommy, lol. ^^

    Keep up the good work.
    WHAT THE FUDGE!!!!

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    Re: Pig Poetry #4

    awww.... that's a really touching poem piggy-chan... ^^ now that you've graduated, it's a really awesome gift for your mom.... *sniffs* Pam likes it very much... lol... keep it up.... ^-^ byeeeee~!

    "Deviously Revamped."



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    Re: Pig Poetry #4

    This is your best poetry yet Piggy! ^^

    walking before me, you stood a mirror,
    reflecting respect, taking the hard steps,
    This is my favourite bit, about how the respect is reflected in the use of a mirror, original!

    I don't think there were any spelling mistakes woo hoo!!

    Its great how you appriciate your mother and wrote this poem, and even though i've said it, congrats again on graduating!! ^^

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Thank you Fudge, Pam, and Kerry, . Much love to all mothers,

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pig Poetry #4

    SCORE!! Another masterpiece....... meh? in my opinion probably not ur best work... but its great !!! ^_^

    *tear* I love mommy too, lol.
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    Re: Pig Poetry #4

    I almost cryed! Where did all of this come from. You should work on making a book. I can't believe how well together put it was. Like it was always that way. Already some kind of anthem. I like it alot!

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Thanks Cere and Myssy

    @Myssy: Me? a book??? lol...these are not worthy to be put in a book. If i had something like a book, it would have pictures of Myssy inside,

    o~Piggy-san~o

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