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Old May 24, 2006, 12:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Pig Poetry #4

title: mother mother

where would i be, eight years only,
a clean plate, a clean slate, you've given me,
hopes you've planted, and success you've dreamed,
your only precious, your treasured possession,
willed me to be more, not two or three, but four

walking before me, you stood a mirror,
reflecting respect, taking the hard steps,
you laid the stones, i merely followed, stumbling,
but not alone, never fearful,
your footsteps engraved, one whole,
my mind, my body, my soul

you fell ill, you stood up,
you are pounded, you are weathered,
yet you endured, we, still together
many years you've led, now I'm finally ahead,
your tree stands tall, your aspirations now reality,
your only student, now graduated,
grateful and indebted, for your sacrifices
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Old May 24, 2006, 12:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Pig Poetry #4

Wow.... wat a vocab, lol. I like I like. Impressive work Pig, I love the description and the atmopshere built around the poem. Awwww... Piggy loves his mommy, lol. ^^

Keep up the good work.
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Old May 24, 2006, 12:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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awww.... that's a really touching poem piggy-chan... ^^ now that you've graduated, it's a really awesome gift for your mom.... *sniffs* Pam likes it very much... lol... keep it up.... ^-^ byeeeee~!
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Old May 24, 2006, 04:58 AM   #4 (permalink)
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This is your best poetry yet Piggy! ^^

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walking before me, you stood a mirror,
reflecting respect, taking the hard steps,
This is my favourite bit, about how the respect is reflected in the use of a mirror, original!

I don't think there were any spelling mistakes woo hoo!!

Its great how you appriciate your mother and wrote this poem, and even though i've said it, congrats again on graduating!! ^^
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Old May 24, 2006, 09:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you Fudge, Pam, and Kerry, . Much love to all mothers,
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SCORE!! Another masterpiece....... meh? in my opinion probably not ur best work... but its great !!! ^_^

*tear* I love mommy too, lol.
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I almost cryed! Where did all of this come from. You should work on making a book. I can't believe how well together put it was. Like it was always that way. Already some kind of anthem. I like it alot!
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Old May 25, 2006, 01:39 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks Cere and Myssy

@Myssy: Me? a book??? lol...these are not worthy to be put in a book. If i had something like a book, it would have pictures of Myssy inside,
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Re: Pig Poetry #4

i like how you reflected

your mom and how she helped you

no matter if she was sick.you know

its like moms sacrafice everything for you

not even thinking about it. this was an awsome poem
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Re: Pig Poetry #4

-sigh-

Capitilization! Oh! How thee misses when the world capitilized correctly. Everything was going fairly well until I hit the third stanza. I was left yawning and wondering when will it end?

I love your use of words. The ending just needs to be jazzed up a bit.
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Capitilization! Oh! How thee misses when the world capitilized correctly. Everything was going fairly well until I hit the third stanza. I was left yawning and wondering when will it end?

I love your use of words. The ending just needs to be jazzed up a bit.
sad to say, i agree, with what u say about the 3rd stanza....

but i dont capitalize...only to place emphasis on words
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