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    Pig Poetry #6

    tittle: One Call

    One in the morning, when the sun has grown tall,
    One in the afternoon, after lunch hour has stalled,
    One in the evening, before light turns to shade,
    One in the night, before dusk becomes day.

    One during the work day, a meeting she delayed,
    One during lunch, his favor she repayed,
    One during his studies, his books put to rest,
    One during his boredom, his smile her request.

    Even on the day when his anger's a risk,
    One call just to say, his love's her one wish.

    ~Piggy

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    lol I like it. As a poem myself, I know how hard it is to ryhme.

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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    Quote Originally Posted by BrightShadow_96
    lol I like it. As a poem myself, I know how hard it is to ryhme.
    you're a "poem"?

    nice poem... it's very interesting. is it about pigs?
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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    that was pretty kool man, all the endings rhymed pretty nice. keep it up man.

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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    Well this is different Pig. lol. Good job with the variety, this is just splendid. Its simple and easy to follow.... at least I dont hav to rack my head interpreting the godamn thing. :P
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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    very good very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *claps*

    thank you equinn

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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    thats classsssssssssssssssssssssssssss
    your better than me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Pig Poetry #6

    I love how you try and make them un-meaningful Piggy! haha

    You used the word 'one' a LOT! haha Repition...it was effective but all those ones would make about 8..or 9. haha

    Very nice poem piggy! ^^

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