Pigtaru Poetry???

*pigtaru* · May 05, 2006, 12:01 AM

Ok, so i'm attempting this for the first time, since I've seen so many poems on AO. I figured I'd give it a shot since I've always been thinking alot but never thought I had any skill, so you tell me...here is my very first and I mean FIRST poem, go easy on me...

Titled: "Natural"

I say natural is nice,
as natural as the flower's blossom at the call of spring,
Her natural face, plain yet curving with cuteness,
Plain and exquistely elegant at the touch of a brush,
Delightful at the tap of a pencil,

At her smile, the rivers and streams sing, the ice melts,
A beauty that isn't afraid of water, nor tears,
A beauty that outlasts the end of the day,
Natural, blinding the eyes, and giving sight to the soul,
Slender is her shape, envious are the mountains,
Butterflies flutter as birds dance to her graceful steps,

Her frown gives birth to a thousand smiles,
Her ugliest moments brings forth her radient glow,
She sleeps and the Earth stop spinning, mesmorized,
Gentle and soothing breaths calms my worries,
I fall away, dreaming, natural is nice

--pigtaru

elie26 · May 05, 2006, 12:31 AM

OMG.....ur good......UR GOOD!! *sobs* tat makes me bad....

haha...urs sound like those pro..i really luved the describing part....8/10- nt bad eh?

cerebrum · May 05, 2006, 02:14 AM

haha, who would hav thought Piggy had a sensitive and artistic side to him, LOL.
Well mate its very descriptive... which is exactly wat I like. You built a great atmosphere thoughout the poem. The only thing I really dont like is the word - 'natural'..... Dont know why, its just me, LOL.

.... Oh right, keep up the good work Piggy. ^_^

*Sashacat* · May 05, 2006, 05:04 AM

By George...a pig can write poetry! I think I'm going to have to call the media for this. Anyway, great job!

*BrightShadow_96* · May 05, 2006, 06:46 AM

Wow! Your making all of my poems look bad. T_T lol. But seriously, your poem is really good.

0verload · May 05, 2006, 07:08 AM

Good poem pig! make me smells piggy here. (joke!) well, thumbs up for you dude!

Alucard_Spriggan · May 05, 2006, 07:21 AM

Hey Pigtaru! Nice poem man! Keep on writing so we can keep reading lol.

*pigtaru* · May 05, 2006, 09:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cerebrum

The only thing I really dont like is the word - 'natural'..... Dont know why, its just me, LOL.
.... Oh right, keep up the good work Piggy. ^_^

Thanks everyone for the response. I really appreciate it.

@Cerebrum: LoL, hey bro, I didnt' know you were a sensitive poetry reader, lol. Yeah, natural is probably not a fancy good word, but I just felt the poem needed it's simplicity. Natural ladies are the best!

*Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me* · May 05, 2006, 12:28 PM

Found your poem! It's really good and easy to understand :P

Your better at writing poetry than me! >.<

mwuhahaha

Joking xD

mixed fighter girl · May 05, 2006, 01:32 PM

Okay u have to write more!!!! lol nice poem man u never know until u try^^ Great job!

Nympho · May 05, 2006, 02:17 PM

OMG! I think i am going to quit poetry! Your first poem can outbeat any of mine! That was so beautiful! I love it how you described everything and giving non breathing things human traits! You are so good! Where did this come from? I forfeit all of my poetry to the Great Trung!

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pigtaru Otaku Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elk Grove, CA USA Posts: 400 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 534	Pigtaru Poetry??? Ok, so i'm attempting this for the first time, since I've seen so many poems on AO. I figured I'd give it a shot since I've always been thinking alot but never thought I had any skill, so you tell me...here is my very first and I mean FIRST poem, go easy on me... Titled: "Natural" I say natural is nice, as natural as the flower's blossom at the call of spring, Her natural face, plain yet curving with cuteness, Plain and exquistely elegant at the touch of a brush, Delightful at the tap of a pencil, At her smile, the rivers and streams sing, the ice melts, A beauty that isn't afraid of water, nor tears, A beauty that outlasts the end of the day, Natural, blinding the eyes, and giving sight to the soul, Slender is her shape, envious are the mountains, Butterflies flutter as birds dance to her graceful steps, Her frown gives birth to a thousand smiles, Her ugliest moments brings forth her radient glow, She sleeps and the Earth stop spinning, mesmorized, Gentle and soothing breaths calms my worries, I fall away, dreaming, natural is nice --pigtaru __________________ o~Piggy-san~o
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elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,151	Re: Pigtaru Poetry??? OMG.....ur good......UR GOOD!! sobs tat makes me bad.... haha...urs sound like those pro..i really luved the describing part....8/10- nt bad eh? __________________
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cerebrum Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Some part of the universe. Posts: 295 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 949	Re: Pigtaru Poetry??? haha, who would hav thought Piggy had a sensitive and artistic side to him, LOL. Well mate its very descriptive... which is exactly wat I like. You built a great atmosphere thoughout the poem. The only thing I really dont like is the word - 'natural'..... Dont know why, its just me, LOL. .... Oh right, keep up the good work Piggy. ^_^ __________________ Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
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0verload Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Location: At the East Headquarters... Posts: 16 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Pigtaru Poetry??? Good poem pig! make me smells piggy here. (joke!) well, thumbs up for you dude! __________________ Slaughtering the Weak, Robbing the Dead ~0verload~
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 701	Re: Pigtaru Poetry??? OMG! I think i am going to quit poetry! Your first poem can outbeat any of mine! That was so beautiful! I love it how you described everything and giving non breathing things human traits! You are so good! Where did this come from? I forfeit all of my poetry to the Great Trung! __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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