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Reply With QuoteOMG.....ur good......UR GOOD!! *sobs* tat makes me bad....haha...urs sound like those pro..i really luved the describing part....8/10- nt bad eh?
Pigtaru Poetry??? Ok, so i'm attempting this for the first time, since I've seen so many poems on AO. I figured I'd give it a shot since I've always been thinking alot but never thought I had any skill, so you tell me...here is my very first and I mean FIRST poem, go easy on me...
Titled: "Natural"
I say natural is nice,
as natural as the flower's blossom at the call of spring,
Her natural face, plain yet curving with cuteness,
Plain and exquistely elegant at the touch of a brush,
Delightful at the tap of a pencil,
At her smile, the rivers and streams sing, the ice melts,
A beauty that isn't afraid of water, nor tears,
A beauty that outlasts the end of the day,
Natural, blinding the eyes, and giving sight to the soul,
Slender is her shape, envious are the mountains,
Butterflies flutter as birds dance to her graceful steps,
Her frown gives birth to a thousand smiles,
Her ugliest moments brings forth her radient glow,
She sleeps and the Earth stop spinning, mesmorized,
Gentle and soothing breaths calms my worries,
I fall away, dreaming, natural is nice
--pigtaru
o~Piggy-san~o
OMG.....ur good......UR GOOD!! *sobs* tat makes me bad....
haha, who would hav thought Piggy had a sensitive and artistic side to him, LOL.
Well mate its very descriptive... which is exactly wat I like. You built a great atmosphere thoughout the poem. The only thing I really dont like is the word - 'natural'..... Dont know why, its just me, LOL.
.... Oh right, keep up the good work Piggy. ^_^
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By George...a pig can write poetry! I think I'm going to have to call the media for this. Anyway, great job!
Wow! Your making all of my poems look bad. T_T lol. But seriously, your poem is really good.
Re: Pigtaru Poetry??? Good poem pig! make me smells piggy here. (joke!) well, thumbs up for you dude!
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Hey Pigtaru! Nice poem man! Keep on writing so we can keep reading lol.
Thanks everyone for the response. I really appreciate it.Originally Posted by cerebrum
@Cerebrum: LoL, hey bro, I didnt' know you were a sensitive poetry reader, lol. Yeah, natural is probably not a fancy good word, but I just felt the poem needed it's simplicity. Natural ladies are the best!
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