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![]() ![]() Credits: 534 | Pigtaru Poetry, #2. Titled: inside Empty hollow shadows fall, ensnared by metals, pricked by thorns, tears are welcomed, holes are worn, trapped between solid walls, Foul and wretched, ammonia stenched, bare and nake, wearing death's scent, bleeding heart, drowned in agony, weeping soul, lynching memories. Lost is the mind, blue not red numbing the feelings, stagnant dead what once was prismatic, shines no more only morbid and gloomy, the conscious adores Hope you guys like it, my second poem, i'm going to bed. NIGHT! EDIT: I was told recently that Mods have issued a rule saying "NO CHATS in poems", just so you guys know... ![]() ~pigtaru
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![]() Credits: 949 | Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #2. haha... wat a way to flaunt ur extensive vocab, LOL. uhhh.... I'll get bck 2 u when I can interpret ur poetry 2 the best of my ability. ^_^ Edit : mmm... this poem reminds me of a novel I read last yr - "Briar Rose" : Based on the holocaust. It creates an atmopshere of entrapment and .... uh suffering. (obviously, LOL). But I guess u could relate it to the suffering of even any average human-being. Well thats my interpretation at least. haha, only Piggy would know, right? ^_^
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![]() ![]() Credits: 436 | Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #2. wow, major vocab pigtaru-san. ouch. Hey, u know what too, i think that wound sound nice if you put music to it. i got a lil melody in me head from that.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 701 | Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #2. Like i will say forever and ever amen! You rock! I love how everything had a meaning and nothing was left undefined. Like if shadows had shadows almost. Things hard to describe. And you made into something very meaningful!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 4,618 | Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #2. That is great Piggy! Kinda serious for you though :P Quote:
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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #2. *claps* That was really good keep it up. ![]()
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,772 | Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #2. I'm not a huge fan of poetry, but that was really good. Keep up the good work Pigtaru . |
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