Pigtaru Poetry, #3

*pigtaru* · May 17, 2006, 12:02 AM

OK OK...so this is #3, thanks everyone for your comments, hope you enjoy this one

titled: I'm listening
by: trung

I've been, Listening,
Listening to songs that's right and wrong,
Listening to words, adjectives and proverbs,
sending messages subliminally like save and Conserve,
some profound, some absurd, some disgraceful and just words

I've been, Listening,
Listening to the lyrics,
sweet rhythm and slurs, like limericks,
like poetry, rhymes, haikus and similes,
lines like, "my worse enemy is my inner me",
words spit by J-live, and Bob Marley,

The beats, piercing your ears with the energy,
taking you higher than the sky,
spawning your wings and you could fly,
drying your tears, brightening your eyes,
So let the base bump, and the music slow flowin',
I'll probably still be here, with you, listening.

inspired by J-live.

Reese · May 17, 2006, 02:32 AM

Yes!!! Beat Cerebrum 2 the post, lol. hahahah!!
Anywho, in all honesty I enjoyed the previous 2 poems so much more. More than likely coz they had more meaning..... well, in relation to life, love etc.

Well its always good to retain a little sanity and steer away from that part of life, lol. ^_^

Keep up the good work 'Pig'.

sora the king of dreams · May 17, 2006, 04:09 AM

it was pretty pretty good but not really good

sachiko ueto · May 17, 2006, 07:50 AM

good......... pretty good, piggy..... nice work.... keep it up...

*ketaro* · May 17, 2006, 09:04 AM

nice work man, the poem is pretty kool, keep it up man.

*pigtaru* · May 17, 2006, 09:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reese

Yes!!! Beat Cerebrum 2 the post, lol. hahahah!!
Anywho, in all honesty I enjoyed the previous 2 poems so much more. More than likely coz they had more meaning..... well, in relation to life, love etc.

Well its always good to retain a little sanity and steer away from that part of life, lol. ^_^

Keep up the good work 'Pig'.

Yes, this one is not as deep, I wanted to relax and just let the normal music flow out of my head...it's more like a short rap stanza wannabe, lol

The Fighter · May 17, 2006, 01:17 PM

Good poem, I can tell that you listen ^_^

ONe question..

Quote:

Listening to words, adjectives and proverbs,

What is a proverb?

*Blade X* · May 17, 2006, 01:27 PM

this is so real. coz i was at a rock concert, the music was loud and i was enjoyed myself. Nice one Pig, enjoyed the realism

*pigtaru* · May 17, 2006, 02:16 PM

@The fighter...Proverb-a condensed but memorable saying embodying some important fact of experience that is taken as true by many people

@Blade- thanks, you realized this one isn't suppose to be all dramatic, I dont like sticking to one type...it's boring to me.

May 17, 2006, 12:02 AM	#1 (permalink)
pigtaru Otaku Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elk Grove, CA USA Posts: 400 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 534	Pigtaru Poetry, #3 OK OK...so this is #3, thanks everyone for your comments, hope you enjoy this one titled: I'm listening by: trung I've been, Listening, Listening to songs that's right and wrong, Listening to words, adjectives and proverbs, sending messages subliminally like save and Conserve, some profound, some absurd, some disgraceful and just words I've been, Listening, Listening to the lyrics, sweet rhythm and slurs, like limericks, like poetry, rhymes, haikus and similes, lines like, "my worse enemy is my inner me", words spit by J-live, and Bob Marley, The beats, piercing your ears with the energy, taking you higher than the sky, spawning your wings and you could fly, drying your tears, brightening your eyes, So let the base bump, and the music slow flowin', I'll probably still be here, with you, listening. inspired by J-live. __________________ o~Piggy-san~o
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Reese Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: "Enigma" Posts: 228 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,228	Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3 Yes!!! Beat Cerebrum 2 the post, lol. hahahah!! Anywho, in all honesty I enjoyed the previous 2 poems so much more. More than likely coz they had more meaning..... well, in relation to life, love etc. Well its always good to retain a little sanity and steer away from that part of life, lol. ^_^ Keep up the good work 'Pig'. __________________
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,464	Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3 this is so real. coz i was at a rock concert, the music was loud and i was enjoyed myself. Nice one Pig, enjoyed the realism __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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pigtaru Otaku Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elk Grove, CA USA Posts: 400 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 534	Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3 @The fighter...Proverb-a condensed but memorable saying embodying some important fact of experience that is taken as true by many people @Blade- thanks, you realized this one isn't suppose to be all dramatic, I dont like sticking to one type...it's boring to me. __________________ o~Piggy-san~o
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