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    Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    OK OK...so this is #3, thanks everyone for your comments, hope you enjoy this one

    titled: I'm listening
    by: trung

    I've been, Listening,
    Listening to songs that's right and wrong,
    Listening to words, adjectives and proverbs,
    sending messages subliminally like save and Conserve,
    some profound, some absurd, some disgraceful and just words

    I've been, Listening,
    Listening to the lyrics,
    sweet rhythm and slurs, like limericks,
    like poetry, rhymes, haikus and similes,
    lines like, "my worse enemy is my inner me",
    words spit by J-live, and Bob Marley,

    The beats, piercing your ears with the energy,
    taking you higher than the sky,
    spawning your wings and you could fly,
    drying your tears, brightening your eyes,
    So let the base bump, and the music slow flowin',
    I'll probably still be here, with you, listening.



    inspired by J-live.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    Yes!!! Beat Cerebrum 2 the post, lol. hahahah!!
    Anywho, in all honesty I enjoyed the previous 2 poems so much more. More than likely coz they had more meaning..... well, in relation to life, love etc.

    Well its always good to retain a little sanity and steer away from that part of life, lol. ^_^

    Keep up the good work 'Pig'.

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    it was pretty pretty good but not really good

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    good......... pretty good, piggy..... nice work.... keep it up...

    They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    nice work man, the poem is pretty kool, keep it up man.

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    Quote Originally Posted by Reese
    Yes!!! Beat Cerebrum 2 the post, lol. hahahah!!
    Anywho, in all honesty I enjoyed the previous 2 poems so much more. More than likely coz they had more meaning..... well, in relation to life, love etc.

    Well its always good to retain a little sanity and steer away from that part of life, lol. ^_^

    Keep up the good work 'Pig'.
    Yes, this one is not as deep, I wanted to relax and just let the normal music flow out of my head...it's more like a short rap stanza wannabe, lol

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    Good poem, I can tell that you listen ^_^

    ONe question..
    Listening to words, adjectives and proverbs,
    What is a proverb?

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #3

    this is so real. coz i was at a rock concert, the music was loud and i was enjoyed myself. Nice one Pig, enjoyed the realism

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