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    Pigtaru Poetry, #8


    title: ask for forgiveness

    I apologize for this reason, for being me,
    I apologize for my eyes, they are blind you see,
    I apologize to you, for being the cause,
    I apologize for the clumsy habitual old flaws.

    I apologize for the reason you frown,
    I apologize, because my conscience still drowns,
    I apologize, hoping to right the wrongs,
    I apologize with a short rhyme, no fancy lavish songs.

    I apologize for wording so rough,
    I apologize, knowing it's not enough,
    I apologize, wishing for drops of sympathy,
    I apolgized...though my heart, still buried in misery.

    Please find it in your heart to forgive and forget,
    Please help me brighten this guilt silhouette.
    Last edited by pigtaru; Jul 20, 2006 at 02:08 PM.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #8

    wow trung this is a awesome apology
    you really know how to word it to make
    make who ever it is thinking about it.
    i liove the poem awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #8

    double posted Chris ^^;;;;

    Anyways.... W-O-W
    The use of words were real nice ^_^ the poem holds a deep meaning i can see
    Please help me brighten this guilt silhouette.
    Me fav part ....

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #8

    The reptiveness was really effective Piggy!

    And you rhymed too! The best part!

    It was sorta sad.. but I really liked it! One of your best!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #8

    Whoever your writing to must have gotten really upset. And for you to go out of your way to apologize openly. Is not like you. But that someone should accept your apology. Seeing how i believe you mean it this time.

    accepted.

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: Pigtaru Poetry, #8

    wow man that was pretty kool, i like the "I apologize" repitition patter that you used.

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