Pigtaru's Poetry 10

*pigtaru* · Oct 26, 2006, 12:37 PM

Title: Learn to Swallow

We learn to swallow these sour strands of sorrow,
Learn to let go that happiness of which we borrowed,
We learn to greet tomorrow's disappointments with a smile,
Learn to exhale what's left of hope before that last mile,

We learn to walk alone down misery's aisle,
Learn to wear loneliness with a dejected style,
We learn to acclimate with our daily distress,
Learn to withdraw the warm feelings we invest,

We learn to bathe in our own despair,
Learn to stare into heartbreak's gloominess glare,
we learn to live with dismal discontent,
Learn to realize that joy is a spurious scent.

Shu · Oct 26, 2006, 01:10 PM

well, that sure sounds sad

nice to see ya around though, its been a while(do you remember me?)

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Oct 26, 2006, 01:32 PM

hey trung long time no see i still remain king of the pyro's with my burning,
this poem is sad changes affect people like this allot and how you depicted
the loneliness is how people live everyday when alone i know this from
personal experince ,i loved this poem very much hope to read another and great to see you back if its just for a while

*pigtaru* · Oct 26, 2006, 01:38 PM

Thanks James and Chris, Definitely good to see your guys still around wreckin' havoc. ^_6.

*Mr. K* · Oct 26, 2006, 05:59 PM

^_^ First things First. =D hi Pig Man~
ok now that, thats done.

^_^ I like the poem.

The whole thing, its so true.

Star Girl · Oct 27, 2006, 06:19 PM

wow tat was pretty good..its very true :P i liked it alot ^-^

*ketaro* · Oct 27, 2006, 08:27 PM

Nice poem piggy, the rhymes at the end of each sentence caught my attention.

sachiko ueto · Oct 28, 2006, 05:14 AM

wow piggy that's so amazing... impressive *claps* i so like it... ^^ it's great..

Oct 26, 2006, 12:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
pigtaru Otaku Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elk Grove, CA USA Posts: 400 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 534	Pigtaru's Poetry 10 Title: Learn to Swallow We learn to swallow these sour strands of sorrow, Learn to let go that happiness of which we borrowed, We learn to greet tomorrow's disappointments with a smile, Learn to exhale what's left of hope before that last mile, We learn to walk alone down misery's aisle, Learn to wear loneliness with a dejected style, We learn to acclimate with our daily distress, Learn to withdraw the warm feelings we invest, We learn to bathe in our own despair, Learn to stare into heartbreak's gloominess glare, we learn to live with dismal discontent, Learn to realize that joy is a spurious scent. __________________ o~Piggy-san~o
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Oct 26, 2006, 01:10 PM	#2 (permalink)
Shu Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 563 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 749	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 10 well, that sure sounds sad nice to see ya around though, its been a while(do you remember me?)
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Oct 26, 2006, 01:32 PM	#3 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 10 hey trung long time no see i still remain king of the pyro's with my burning, this poem is sad changes affect people like this allot and how you depicted the loneliness is how people live everyday when alone i know this from personal experince ,i loved this poem very much hope to read another and great to see you back if its just for a while __________________
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Oct 26, 2006, 01:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
pigtaru Otaku Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elk Grove, CA USA Posts: 400 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 534	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 10 Thanks James and Chris, Definitely good to see your guys still around wreckin' havoc. ^_6. __________________ o~Piggy-san~o
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,269 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 3,586	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 10 ^_^ First things First. =D hi Pig Man~ ok now that, thats done. ^_^ I like the poem. The whole thing, its so true. __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,247 Thanks: 27 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts Credits: 24,435	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 10 Nice poem piggy, the rhymes at the end of each sentence caught my attention.
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