Pigtaru's Poetry 7

*pigtaru* · Jun 14, 2006, 03:17 PM

title: Convicted

by: Trung

Paint me with your brush of conviction,
Cover the canvas with my sins and put on me trial,
Bind my hands with your smeared contradictions,
Throw away the key and stamp "CASE CLOSED" on my file.

Slice my skin with your edge of affliction,
Pierce my flesh with your slanted sword,
Imprison me in your fallible predictions,
Erase my innocence, the evidence still unexplored.

Crucify me on your cross of injustice,
Nail me shut, and bury me with a stigma,
Lynch me with false accusations, your claims ficticious,
Whether guilty or not is still an enigma.

~Piggy

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 14, 2006, 03:23 PM

being fausly accused is very wrong
infact i have saying.judging someone
before you know the fact makes you
more guilty than the person you blame.
very awesome poem Trung i love this poem

The Fighter · Jun 14, 2006, 04:03 PM

Yet anothe classic poem by the Pig, You had the best imagery usage every! Man That was very good! You realy went all the way with this one!

*ketaro* · Jun 14, 2006, 08:26 PM

dang man, that was pretty kool, keep it up.

Sakura Princess · Jun 15, 2006, 05:58 AM

OOOOOOOO......it's so cute.....I' m not talking about the poem I'm talkinga bout the piggy....*giggles* just kidding around. I love your poem 100%

*equinn* · Jun 15, 2006, 08:29 AM

omg thats ssssssssssooooooo good i realy like the bit when it said Pierce my flesh with your slanted sword, people can relate to that bit i can

Nympho · Jun 15, 2006, 08:49 PM

Wow! This was a surprise. It sounds nothing like what you have wrote before! Its so convicting and forward. Almost like you've had it with someone and don't want to feel in the middle anymore. Either that or you know your going to do something that will be.....wrong? I thought it was a awesome poem. But a little intimidating, like you.

elie26 · Jun 15, 2006, 11:57 PM

1st of all, the words that you used to rhyme are REAL difficult to find others to rhyme with...so congrats to u for making it sound so good
another is to ur vocab coz it seriously rocks..
and i love the way u portray it using art work and all that stuff...
it's a short piece but everything that goes with it seems unoticable...
best work i've seen on AO. really.

Jun 14, 2006, 03:17 PM	#1 (permalink)
pigtaru Otaku Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elk Grove, CA USA Posts: 400 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 534	Pigtaru's Poetry 7 title: Convicted by: Trung Paint me with your brush of conviction, Cover the canvas with my sins and put on me trial, Bind my hands with your smeared contradictions, Throw away the key and stamp "CASE CLOSED" on my file. Slice my skin with your edge of affliction, Pierce my flesh with your slanted sword, Imprison me in your fallible predictions, Erase my innocence, the evidence still unexplored. Crucify me on your cross of injustice, Nail me shut, and bury me with a stigma, Lynch me with false accusations, your claims ficticious, Whether guilty or not is still an enigma. ~Piggy __________________ o~Piggy-san~o
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7 being fausly accused is very wrong infact i have saying.judging someone before you know the fact makes you more guilty than the person you blame. very awesome poem Trung i love this poem __________________
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The Fighter Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2006 Location: Streets of Compton, Posts: 274 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 506	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7 Yet anothe classic poem by the Pig, You had the best imagery usage every! Man That was very good! You realy went all the way with this one! __________________ \|The Kicks\| \|My AO Gallery\| \|Arcade\| \|5000 Thread\| \|SF vs. MK\|
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Jun 14, 2006, 08:26 PM	#4 (permalink)
ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,247 Thanks: 27 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts Credits: 24,435	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7 dang man, that was pretty kool, keep it up.
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Jun 15, 2006, 08:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,681 Thanks: 11 Thanked 30 Times in 28 Posts Credits: 19,781	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7 omg thats ssssssssssooooooo good i realy like the bit when it said Pierce my flesh with your slanted sword, people can relate to that bit i can __________________ Lizzie + Phil together for 8 months! and to be longer! WOOP! http://neko-panda.deviantart.com/
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 701	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7 Wow! This was a surprise. It sounds nothing like what you have wrote before! Its so convicting and forward. Almost like you've had it with someone and don't want to feel in the middle anymore. Either that or you know your going to do something that will be.....wrong? I thought it was a awesome poem. But a little intimidating, like you. __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,151	Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7 1st of all, the words that you used to rhyme are REAL difficult to find others to rhyme with...so congrats to u for making it sound so good another is to ur vocab coz it seriously rocks.. and i love the way u portray it using art work and all that stuff... it's a short piece but everything that goes with it seems unoticable... best work i've seen on AO. really. __________________
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