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    title: Convicted

    by: Trung

    Paint me with your brush of conviction,
    Cover the canvas with my sins and put on me trial,
    Bind my hands with your smeared contradictions,
    Throw away the key and stamp "CASE CLOSED" on my file.

    Slice my skin with your edge of affliction,
    Pierce my flesh with your slanted sword,
    Imprison me in your fallible predictions,
    Erase my innocence, the evidence still unexplored.

    Crucify me on your cross of injustice,
    Nail me shut, and bury me with a stigma,
    Lynch me with false accusations, your claims ficticious,
    Whether guilty or not is still an enigma.



    ~Piggy

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    being fausly accused is very wrong
    infact i have saying.judging someone
    before you know the fact makes you
    more guilty than the person you blame.
    very awesome poem Trung i love this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    Yet anothe classic poem by the Pig, You had the best imagery usage every! Man That was very good! You realy went all the way with this one!

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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    dang man, that was pretty kool, keep it up.

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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    OOOOOOOO......it's so cute.....I' m not talking about the poem I'm talkinga bout the piggy....*giggles* just kidding around. I love your poem 100%
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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    omg thats ssssssssssooooooo good i realy like the bit when it said Pierce my flesh with your slanted sword, people can relate to that bit i can

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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    Wow! This was a surprise. It sounds nothing like what you have wrote before! Its so convicting and forward. Almost like you've had it with someone and don't want to feel in the middle anymore. Either that or you know your going to do something that will be.....wrong? I thought it was a awesome poem. But a little intimidating, like you.

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    Re: Pigtaru's Poetry 7

    1st of all, the words that you used to rhyme are REAL difficult to find others to rhyme with...so congrats to u for making it sound so good
    another is to ur vocab coz it seriously rocks..
    and i love the way u portray it using art work and all that stuff...
    it's a short piece but everything that goes with it seems unoticable...
    best work i've seen on AO. really.

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