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    Pitiful

    Stone cold with my stomach turning,
    I was hiding away form myself,
    Away from you,
    Like nothing though something was terribly wrong.
    I admit that I was only waiting for the right time.
    The right moment for you to look away,
    Though you never did I'd pretend to follow,
    So I can look where I don't belong.

    I remember every word you said,
    Come back here time,
    Come back.
    I remember I was so beaten and pitiful.

    And I know as I hammered those nails into your beautiful hands,
    Your eyes they tried to search for mine,
    But I look away.
    Now your eyes are the only thing that can save me,
    I'm still afraid of them piercing.
    Your breaking into my prison,
    By suicide I walk away.

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    Re: Pitiful

    Nice, nice poem moni like most the the first line.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Pitiful

    Wow...I liked it alot.It was a bit dark,yet truly wonderful.Awesome job Vincent.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Pitiful

    I'm glad you all liked it. If you can't tell, I'm a bit deprived of inspiration...

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    Re: Pitiful

    a little on the dark/macabre side but a good poem anyway.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: Pitiful

    Nice poem man, keep up the good work.

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