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    Please,Dad <passed on>

    As soft winds sweep away the days
    I look back on life through a haze.
    Remember playgrounds, parks and friends,
    In childlike gaze that never ends.
    The laughter in a game of catch,
    Shall memory ever attach...
    To innocence in youthful eyes,
    Catching the ball to Dad's surprise.

    I recall my first bike, first wreck,
    Who picked me up, said, "What the heck?"
    Convinced me to give one more try,
    While, knees skinned, I forgot to cry.
    Just the joy knowing he was there,
    Making him proud my only care.
    There was nothing I couldn't do,
    My heart held fast that to be true.

    Though teenage years were kind of rough,
    I sure wasn't too big or tough.
    You taught me to defend what's right
    And never back down from a fight.
    So I learned the hard way to stand,
    Still, with each lump, I found your hand.
    Drawing from you an inner strength,
    And stubborn pride of equal length.

    But there the line of fate was drawn,
    As though I blinked and you were gone.
    I found myself facing the sun,
    Not woman, not girl, fatherless, one.
    Eyes blinded by a void inside,
    I could not live that you had died.
    Alas finding it to be true,
    I could do nothing without you.

    Please, Dad, today just hear my call,
    I'm sorry that I dropped the ball.
    My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned,
    My emotions undisciplined.
    I can't get up although I try,
    Please don't be upset if I cry.
    Though I can't fight what I can't see,
    Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me.

    < dedicated to my dad who passed on not long ago. comments?...>
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    Re: Please,Dad <passed on>

    .......I am truly sorry for ur loss.....nothing can take back the memories of a parent that has died...nothing that anyone says will bring him back....no pain of loss is as great as losing a father or mother....I am sorry that u lost ur father and if u need someone to talk to or someone to cry to....I am always here for u and I am truly truly sorry for ur loss. Just remember the good times and not the bad and remember that he is always with u and watching u....He is in a better place and is safe without pain or anything....he is in good hands.

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    Re: Please,Dad <passed on>

    Ah Alucard-san! *Rubs eyes* you just made me cry with those comments lol. jeese im such a sap. but yes, i take your words to heart.
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    Re: Please,Dad <passed on>

    I am sorry but I know from experience loss is hard...but even though I have lost over 50 good friends from sword fighting....I could never imagine lossing a parent...so I am truly sorry and if there is anything I can do let me know...I would like to help u cope with this pain of loss.

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    Re: Please,Dad <passed on>

    alright. I will use that sometime perhaps.
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    Re: Please,Dad <passed on>

    I have no problem helping...so if u need my help just tell me.

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