Very difficult to read because of the capital letters!
Your really great with the rhyming! ^^
The way you used repition made it all the more effective!
I like this verse!:
Especially the last line, it really caught my eye!Don't Break My Heart, Cause You'll Only Make Me Cry.
Don't Kiss Me Gently If You're Just Gonna Leave
Don't Tell Me To Have Faith, If You Don't Believe
Don't Say You Love Me, Then Turn And Walk Away.
Don't Say You Wanna Be With Me Unless It's Everyday.
I'm really starting to like your poems Othello!! Keep writing! XD


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