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    please don't go...

    please tell me what it's like... is it good or bad?
    i will accept any critisims or comments.....


    Is this the end?
    Are we really not going to see each other ever again?
    How can you do this?
    Can you live well without me?

    All the days we spent together,
    All the hopes we shared preciously,
    All the sweet kisses we had
    I'm still the same..

    Look at me, look into my eyes and tell me again that its the end
    Even when I beg and plead, you have no answer
    This can't be, why do I have to let you go?
    I don't even know the reason why

    Please just give me more time, even just a day..
    I can understand that you've been having a hard time
    But this isn't it, look at me again
    You are just pushing me out telling me to forget you

    I hate it when you say "be well, be happy" more than death itself
    I dont want to hear the words "im sorry, forgive me"
    When you tell those things to me, I really do need to let you go..
    But you know I can't do that

    Please don't go
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    Re: please don't go...

    very good poem i like how you sound desprate to
    keep him but also dont know if you should its like your confused
    and the fact you kept saying dont go was like you was begging wich is pretty sad if you love them and they go away ignroing your words. very awesome i love this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: please don't go...

    kinda reminds me of how i had to do this once......made me feel bad....such sadness.......good poem, keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: please don't go...

    I like this alot. Keep it up.

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    Re: please don't go...

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    kinda reminds me of how i had to do this once......made me feel bad....such sadness.......good poem, keep it up
    *glares*


    Anyways, just like Chalice said ^_^ there's a hint of desperateness..(i dun think that's a word)
    It's good

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    Re: please don't go...

    thank's for the comments...

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    Re: please don't go...

    wow....I think that was really good..Its the best Poem I heard in a while...

    Great job.

    Are you going to make another one??

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    Re: please don't go...

    yeah, i think i will make another one...

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