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    Fallen Angel PhoenixSara may be famous one day PhoenixSara's Avatar
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    Please let me go

    How many times, have i tried to say good bye?
    How many times will you make my eyes cry?
    How many times will you say the words you don't mean?
    Just to have me broken to pieces again.

    As the wind says once again I am a fool,
    My heart cries out to be the one for you.
    My mind tells me it's time to turn away,
    I am shattered in pieces never to be whole again.

    Will you let me hurt slowly?
    Will you now let me go.
    Will you let my tears flow?
    Will you take into consideration how i feel?
    Will you let me go and be whole again.

    I have to say my good byes and so long for now.
    My heart breaks but my mind says it's time.
    Hoping you'll see this note and not take it wrong.
    Praying your heart will see what's gone wrong.

    I hope you see i am so broken and hurt,
    Please listen to what is best.
    It may hurt but please see what I am,
    I am praying and hoping you will let me go.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Cool Re: Please let me go

    Break-ups never seem to be easy; especially, ones that have deep meaning toward both people. Mutuality is the key for a good relationship. Sometimes, there might be some complaints and struggles along the way, but that's normal. Very nice on the choice of words. Nice display of emotions and great rhyming couplets. Keep up the good work.

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