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    Poem 1

    I look above all I reached
    I have a limited to where I'll go
    Trust you want from me
    You broke it
    Now you can never repair it
    Dont look at me that way
    And wonder what maybe wrong with me
    You know what it is
    But yet you act to stupid and not realize
    Such like you sicken me
    Angry me to strike
    I know you see the hatred in my eyes
    I know you fear me deep inside
    I know because I fear myself
    I'm two souls in one body
    You adore my loving side
    Yet you rather I keep my evil side hidden
    Why do you want me to?
    Do you feel you're looking at the devil himself?
    I smile knowing the truth
    Even when you won't admit it to yourself
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    Re: Poem 1

    Hmm... I don't know what this is about but this certainly is interesting. Keep it up ^_^

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    Re: Poem 1

    For the lack of punctuatuon? The poem actually has a nice flow.
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    Re: Poem 1

    Why don't you put all your poems (which are great) all in one thread.

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    Re: Poem 1

    That sinteresting I understand most of it. Its good though. Keep it up.

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