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    A poem by...

    My heart
    feels ripped out;

    like it's laying before me

    .alone.

    why...

    why is it still beating
    when there is no blood left;

    see

    it's there

    ... still beating.

    Still beating though it hath no life.

    i'm afraid to pick it

    up

    ... so fragile; this little heart
    that beats with no blood

    outside

    the body...

    Your gentle hands
    look like claws

    but can pick things up;
    so tenderly...

    please, when you've picked

    me

    up...

    don't

    go...

    i...

    .you.

    are my

    light

    blood

    life.

    ^_^ hee hee! you like? i hope so...

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    Re: A poem by...

    Aw!! I love it. I imagine a really hot, tough guy being really gentle! You're so good!! Write more!!

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    Re: A poem by...

    ; _ ;



    ...............did I do something wrong???

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    Re: A poem by...

    Quote Originally Posted by Red_Wings
    I imagine a really hot, tough guy being really gentle!
    Well, that's pretty much Soshi in a nutshell! thanks for the compliment!

    And Darling... where was my heart when i met you? where was my blood? where was my life? ... it was only in my body when your GENTLE hands that LOOK LIKE claws picked it up for me... ^_^

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    *looks at the screen speechless*

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    Re: A poem by...

    wow that was good, but a little bit scary 2.


    Thank you soooo much equinn for leting me us this pic of your!!!!!

    This is a cute little clip:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PrZQIayUnbA

    My favorite song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8frvSHvlzSM

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    kool poem, it was really nice and neat. keep it up.

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    Re: A poem by...

    Quote Originally Posted by Abu Dhabi
    And Darling... where was my heart when i met you? where was my blood? where was my life? ... it was only in my body when your GENTLE hands that LOOK LIKE claws picked it up for me... ^_^
    -.- Your heart was with a giant albino woman who had hair long enough to be considered a demon... and used for having useless crushes on men who had no personality at all.

    -_- Hmph. That's where you were before you met me.


    ...

    ^u^ Heehee, jes teasin' hun... ..... well, not really, those guys were pretty useless, and that girl was a demon. XD A really mono-toned demon.


    >_> Pf, I could've taken any of those men out! .... well, maybe not Josue (did I spell his name right? ) ... friggin' capoeira b@stard.......

    ... ^u^ (just goes to show you that all foreigners that go to that school kick @$$.... XD)


    ^_^ But I do like the poem... I love it...
    You sooo sweet my lil' hun-bun! ^U^ *cuddles*

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