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    a poem

    i wonder when did i become like this
    i wonder when i see the skies when does it all ends

    this pain thatss growing inside of me
    this feeling thats building up inside of me

    the pain that began since she left
    the feeling that began the night i was left alone

    i tried to ignore you
    i tried to forget you
    i tried to leave you

    but every time i attempt
    i failed

    i always remember you when i close my eyes
    i always see your unfading smile
    i always see your soft hands reaching to me
    i always feel your unfelt side
    i always feel your sweet feelings towards me
    i always feel your warmness in my heart

    although you're gone
    always know that
    i love you .....
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by powerxxx
    although you're gone
    always know that
    i love you .....
    again awesome! it was sad in the beginning at the end its still sad, but thats awesome loving goin around!


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    Re: a poem

    a sad poem but a good one. keep it up !!!

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    Re: a poem

    it's sad but very good i like it but i guess u like someone alot huh? u keep saying i love u.
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    Cool Re: a poem

    so much feeling...wow...

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    Re: a poem

    A poem trying to forget the one love but you cant, you are still in love with her..
    i tried to ignore you
    i tried to forget you
    i tried to leave you
    but it faild, Great poem! Pact with truth! Good job!

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    Re: a poem

    It was pretty dark and sweet man! nice job!

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    Re: a poem

    i always remember you when i close my eyes
    i always see your unfading smile
    i always see your soft hands reaching to me
    i always feel your unfelt side
    i always feel your sweet feelings towards me
    i always feel your warmness in my heart
    To much "I always" Gave me a head-ache. But all in all, a great poem. I can really sense the pressure rising through time. Please write more. ^^

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