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Old Jun 21, 2006, 10:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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a poem

i wonder when did i become like this
i wonder when i see the skies when does it all ends

this pain thatss growing inside of me
this feeling thats building up inside of me

the pain that began since she left
the feeling that began the night i was left alone

i tried to ignore you
i tried to forget you
i tried to leave you

but every time i attempt
i failed

i always remember you when i close my eyes
i always see your unfading smile
i always see your soft hands reaching to me
i always feel your unfelt side
i always feel your sweet feelings towards me
i always feel your warmness in my heart

although you're gone
always know that
i love you .....
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 11:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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although you're gone
always know that
i love you .....
again awesome! it was sad in the beginning at the end its still sad, but thats awesome loving goin around!
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 11:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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a sad poem but a good one. keep it up !!!
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 12:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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it's sad but very good i like it but i guess u like someone alot huh? u keep saying i love u.
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 01:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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so much feeling...wow...
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 02:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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A poem trying to forget the one love but you cant, you are still in love with her..
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i tried to ignore you
i tried to forget you
i tried to leave you
but it faild, Great poem! Pact with truth! Good job!
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Old Jun 22, 2006, 11:04 AM   #7 (permalink)
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It was pretty dark and sweet man! nice job!
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i always remember you when i close my eyes
i always see your unfading smile
i always see your soft hands reaching to me
i always feel your unfelt side
i always feel your sweet feelings towards me
i always feel your warmness in my heart
To much "I always" Gave me a head-ache. But all in all, a great poem. I can really sense the pressure rising through time. Please write more. ^^
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