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Reply With Quoteagain awesome! it was sad in the beginning at the end its still sad, but thats awesome loving goin around!Originally Posted by powerxxx
i wonder when did i become like this
i wonder when i see the skies when does it all ends
this pain thatss growing inside of me
this feeling thats building up inside of me
the pain that began since she left
the feeling that began the night i was left alone
i tried to ignore you
i tried to forget you
i tried to leave you
but every time i attempt
i failed
i always remember you when i close my eyes
i always see your unfading smile
i always see your soft hands reaching to me
i always feel your unfelt side
i always feel your sweet feelings towards me
i always feel your warmness in my heart
although you're gone
always know that
i love you .....
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
again awesome! it was sad in the beginning at the end its still sad, but thats awesome loving goin around!
a sad poem but a good one. keep it up !!!
it's sad but very good i like it but i guess u like someone alot huh? u keep saying i love u.
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I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.
Re: a poem so much feeling...wow...
A poem trying to forget the one love but you cant, you are still in love with her..
but it faild, Great poem! Pact with truth! Good job!i tried to ignore you
i tried to forget you
i tried to leave you
It was pretty dark and sweet man! nice job!
To much "I always" Gave me a head-ache. But all in all, a great poem. I can really sense the pressure rising through time. Please write more. ^^i always remember you when i close my eyes
i always see your unfading smile
i always see your soft hands reaching to me
i always feel your unfelt side
i always feel your sweet feelings towards me
i always feel your warmness in my heart
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