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    Poem 2

    Do you not see me?
    Am I just standing here invisible?
    You can't walk though me
    You can't see pass me
    Yet apparently you ignore me
    Why is that?
    Do you think if you do so I'll go away?
    That maybe I never existed to begin with?
    Dead wrong you truely are
    You once looked at me with fear
    Do I haunt your dreams?
    You make my blood boil
    I want so badly to watch you bleed
    Taste the crimson color that flow from you
    I hate fithy humans like you
    But what can I do?
    Nothing is the answer
    You ignore me but so what
    I smile and walk away
    You have awaken a nightmare
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    Re: Poem 2

    Okay don't tell me it's about your fight >_> Or it sounds like one. It's not too violent neither too dark. I like it.

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    Re: Poem 2

    Well.. I the use of yhe word "you" begans to become annoying to me. Trying another word to describe the person would be great.
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    Re: Poem 2

    Theres is a very small, dark part of myself. That is burried deeply... But it feels this way about ALOT of people. Very good poem.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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