"a poem #2"

!flaminghate · Aug 18, 2007, 12:14 AM

I've got problems I hide,
Solutions for your problems.

I've got tears that I hold back,
Tissues for yours.

I've got fears no one knows,
Weapons to help you stand up to yours.

I've got dreams I want to fulfill,
Plans to help you reach yours.

I've got anger bottled up in me,
Advice to help you get over yours.

I've got scars from past loves,
bandaids to heal your wounds.

I've got love I share,
Love I give you.

!Jamie5192 · Aug 18, 2007, 08:21 PM

i like this poem^^ it reminds me of someone who i am very close with...

*RayMe* · Aug 19, 2007, 09:13 AM

The poem speaks of the truth...

it is always like that in relationship ^^ one sacrifices for another... i like the theme... and nice way of putting em all together..

good work ^^

Aug 18, 2007, 12:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	"a poem #2" I've got problems I hide, Solutions for your problems. I've got tears that I hold back, Tissues for yours. I've got fears no one knows, Weapons to help you stand up to yours. I've got dreams I want to fulfill, Plans to help you reach yours. I've got anger bottled up in me, Advice to help you get over yours. I've got scars from past loves, bandaids to heal your wounds. I've got love I share, Love I give you.
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Aug 18, 2007, 08:21 PM	#2 (permalink)
!Jamie5192 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -184	Re: "a poem #2" i like this poem^^ it reminds me of someone who i am very close with...
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: "a poem #2" The poem speaks of the truth... it is always like that in relationship ^^ one sacrifices for another... i like the theme... and nice way of putting em all together.. good work ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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